Reviews for Dark Paradise
Guest chapter 27 . 12/24/2013
1 it was great

2 Jacob

3 Kathryn

4 Jacob and Violet hate each other then slowly start to like each other again?

5 Yay Jacob? I don't really have any feelings about that

6 Amazing story!
Guest chapter 27 . 4/11/2013
Just spent the day reading ur dyoty and loved it Kathryn and rose r probably my fav characters love how they r portrayed jacob as well. violet dont like her anymore
Ms M.E.B.S chapter 27 . 3/9/2013
Wow, this is so complicated I can hardly keep up! Great chapter, nice to see the update;)

I’m not sure I liked how Violet reacted to Evan’s treachery. She should’ve killed him, of course, but I felt like she did a little too quickly and too impulsively. I always assumed Violet a deep, calculating thinker.

And I do like Kathryn much better than Violet and Jacob much better than Alexander. Perhaps the two can become a couple? And I wonder how Kathryn raised her daughter. And, in total, how much time has gone past in this story exactly?

I mean, what year is it...because I'm kinda confused as to where they are in time?

Or maybe that's the illusion you're trying to create – that, because they're all immortals, time is irrelevant to them and, it doesn’t matter how much time passes by for them, grudges will still be held and hearts will still shatter.

So many questions! Update soon:D
corkykellems chapter 27 . 3/9/2013
Hooray for Jake...Hopefully he can have a life now
pratik.mohanta chapter 27 . 3/9/2013
Arent u rushing the story a bit. Pls dont make jacob return to that bitch.
xXElite WolfXx chapter 27 . 3/8/2013
Wow it's been awhile... But the story still Kicks ASS!
Really Interesting concept you have with Madeline being still alive.
So Jake was right about Even not being who he said he was, but I got to say I really don't feel that bad for Violet considering ever since Jacob saved The Cullen's she's pretty much been a BITCH to him in my Opinion.
As for Jacob waking up Madeline, I don't think he's just waking her up to kill Alexander and Kathryn. There has to be another reason and judging by Jacob calling her grandma maybe in some crazy way he knows her, or maybe he was just being sarcastic and reading into it to much.
Awesome Chapter!

ALEX!
sindhura chapter 27 . 3/8/2013
Loved this chapter... Update soon
twilightbd2luver chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
Please update already! :))))))
cecld16 chapter 26 . 1/19/2013
Great story but violet is being a bitch can't Jacob stronger than her so he could kill her or teach her a lesson?
xXElite WolfXx chapter 26 . 12/28/2012
Awesome Chapter!
I knew Jake was up to something...
As far as me liking Violet I really don't.
Excited to see what this whole plan that Jake and Alexander have is about!
Great Job!

ALEX!
sindhura chapter 26 . 12/28/2012
Finally! But this chapter was worth the long wait. I dont think i'll ever like violet. I hope she dies and rots in hell. I love all the characters... Kathryn, alexander, rose everyone except violet. I hope Evan betrays her like how she betrayed jake. What are alexander and jake upto now?
twilightbd2luver chapter 26 . 12/28/2012
He was talking to Alexander? What's their plan? Omg... This story is like a total mystery. I'm really looking forward to c27 ! :)))))
yourfriendlyneighborhoodturtle chapter 7 . 11/21/2012
Very interesting twist :) "Supernatural fan" too?
yourfriendlyneighborhoodturtle chapter 6 . 11/21/2012
Just for curiosities sake, do you watch the Vampire Diaries television series? It has similar themes with Original vampires and doppelgangers and curses. In any case, your story is really good and I am enjoying the read :D
J chapter 24 . 11/8/2012
Awwww she loves jake! Too bad shes somewhat of a villain... Can't wait!
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