| Reviews for Silent but Deadly |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 6/12 Hey man... How've ya been... I hope youre going on with your life just as you expected it to be... Sigh how life goes on... Hell i cant believe it already has been 8 years... I stumbled upon " silent but deadly" on december 2013... And its been on of my most favourite pokemon fanfiction ever... I dont know if youre ever gonna read this... But if you do.. I want you to know that.. Its not just this fic... Every fic you wrote was beautiful... Youre an amazimg author.. Im blessed to have been able to read your fics... Take care man... I wish you a wonderful life And... Thanky you |
 Xanran chapter 5 . 12/11/2019 Okay, so I'm going to be real here. I'm a hardcore Amourshipper, so I usually don't look at other fanfictions, but I gotta say, this was well-written. I don't usually pay attention to fabrics like that, but this fanfic got me hooked. Great job. Anyway, now that the good stuff's out of the way, now onto the stuff that can be improved. I did feel that the fanfiction was a little fast-paced, and I'm not really a fan of the whole idea of May going "Oh, what the hell? I'm just going to kiss him!" idea because that basically came out of nowhere. Other than that though, the plot was well-designed, and I love the whole "unknowingly breaking someone's heart plot" and then that person suffers through a form of depression. Great job on this fanfiction. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/24/2019 Awesome story My favourite part : All of Ash's Pokemon were fully evolved |
| TepigDude chapter 5 . 4/7/2018 Yay Ashykins! |
| Western-Otaku chapter 5 . 12/15/2017 That was awesome! I'm a little sad Ash fell for Dawn first since I ship Ash and May so hard but at least they had a happy ending! |
| jbadillodavila chapter 1 . 9/7/2017 Genial vht |
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/13/2017 That was an amazing story and I love how ash became red |
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/8/2016 great story, and the "..." brought the video games to real life haha loved it! |
| NumbKid chapter 5 . 8/5/2016 Whoah. Thank God he wasn't mute. I thought something happened that made him physically impossible to speak. Glad that Ash opened up. I really liked the fact that May kissed him. I did not expect that. Cute little story, good job! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/2/2016 Awesome I love it and it is a great story |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/14/2016 I was a bit underwellmed I thought the reveal would be ash died. It's otherwise a good story I would say ash abandoning a Pokémon is OOC but then I remember Pidgeot |
| dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 4/17/2016 Great chapter and plot |
| Pegasister60 chapter 5 . 4/11/2016 I love the way you wrote Ash, and how his shell cracked until the ship shone through! You are amazing and this story is too! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/23/2016 Perfect |
| Blackcharizard62 chapter 5 . 2/15/2016 Dude come back plz? |
