Nice. I still think Egypt could have whipped their butts. Also how are they going to convince the ever stubborn gods of this new development?

No, no NO! The Greeks can't win! They started this, and THEY'RE the prideful ones, and THEY were the spies! COME ON!

Seriously, there acting like attention hogging kids. It's annoying.

DISRESPECT I'LL SHOW YOU DISRESPECT! The Egyptian are FAR more ancient and powerful than the Greeks and they should be TREATED AS SUCH! Sorry, I'm ranting. Also the villain HAS to be Chaos. He's always the first in the majority of myths and he's on the verge of rising in the Egyptian world. ITHAS TO BE HIM!

Oh my gods this is perfect!

Thank you Amos. This is the perfect conspiracy theory. Now they have just means to kick Percy and Annabeth's butts.

I really hope Sadie and Carter kick their butts and interrogate them well after they find out that they're spies. And then they get along after that.

It was good. I got a little confused at the "it was a trap" thing. But overall it was excellent!

Good job on this story! This is really interesting and almost nothing keeps my attention this long! I think I have ADHD, even though no one else seems to.

This is an amazing Story. Great work keep it up.

yay! I was really mad that she was gone. I still am but whatever

ppppppppplllllllllzzzzzzzzzzz do peeerddie

whhyyyyyyyyyyyy..perdie :(

shezmoo. huh.

Interesting..