Reviews for Romeo and Juliette
noah chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
K-POP i love K-POP
Ryuuko Haruna chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Awww! That was so cute!
maihime32 chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
i read most of your stories and youre use of word really inspire me.i think it what makes your story more exciting and thrilling! LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT STORY
maru2360 chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
i like your story but there are some parts that i dont undrestand like why would you put korean in a japanese story, it just doesnt add up:P
haruYuki chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
nice plot!its just the first part was kindda boring and you did'nt do a great job in revising your story.
HoLyKniGht63 chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
GREAT STORY! I LIKED IT SO MUCH
AngelSanctuary chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
ahh!rima and nagihiko i like them so much but sad ending
A person in the shadows chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
I stumbled across this atrocious fandom called Shugo Chara, lingering and seeking for a decent, professional literary work to scan across. My search has come to a close as I found this exquisite piece of work. The title leaves me breathless, for even if it sounds like one of Shakespeare's works, it leaves me in wondrous thought of what it could be about. My heart starts to erupt as I click on the link to enter the story's world. I am astonished.

"Hey." Rima's voice reverberated in the small room, startling the indigo haired boy with her. "How do you suppose we should start on our project?" This first line catches my eyes immediately and it's giving me such high hopes as I continue to read forward. Young lady, you have amazing skills so far. Have you ever considering branching out into other fandoms? What draws you to stay in such a pathetic fandom such as this? Your skills take you so far.

Now I don't mean to be a brag, but my goodness, your simple structure is just so powerful that it leaves me in a mysterious thought about what you'll write next.

Back to my proper reviewing. Such elegance floats through the character development between Sir Fujisaki and Madam Mashiro as they progress through this project. A forbidden love that casually blooms like a blue rose is what I imagine when I see Sir Fujisaki falling in love with Madam Mashiro in a matter of days. You, amazing authoress, have proven that love can happen in any moment. Love can happen in any amount of time and with anyone. I'd like to tip my hat off to you for showing your readers what you can do with such a simple story.

Your grammar is so impeccable as well. Considering that this fandom is full of horrible, vague grammar mistakes, it's nice to see a change once in a while. Your commas were spot on and every single word flowed like a silent stream. Where do you get such vulnerable vocabulary? Does it naturally come into your mind?

You, Chronos, are a very good author. This fanfic has put me into tears now. You are like magic flying sparkles. I hope you know that you do have talent. I am not exaggerating. You have this gift of simplicity and you should cherish it. And I've even heard rumors of your legendary trolling skills, but I am not one to whisper and tell. I hope you have a nice day. As for my identity, it is not needed for I am only a person lingering in the shadows, to be forgotten and not known.
Riri-chi chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
WHAT

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CHRONOS THIS IS SO AMAZING!

I really really love it! As your #1 fan of the Chronos Fanclub, you have astounded me again. Seriously, your writing is so simple yet so cute! I really love the song Romeo and Juliette so this made it even better! It was all in IC, which once again, you have proven to do. And you say you're jealous of my writing skills? BRO YOU'RE SUPERIOR. YOU GOT SKILLS YO. You should write more soon so I can squee and spazz over it! I'm adding this to my favorites~
Shidonii chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
I swear I thought it was going to be a Romeo and Cinderella thing. XD Who sings this song? :O I still don't know a lot of Kpop. ORZ;;

This was so cute~. n0n I loved their video. w Lol Nagi has Disney logic. Falling in love with somebody in just a few days. XD I don't understand why they couldn't be together, though. :O Hmmm.

Of course. Anything (IC) Rimahiko deserves an A. w)b Just like this fic. A FOR CHRO-CHAN FROM SHIDONII~ 0)/

*stamps A on this fic*

:3

WHY DO YOU IMPROV SO GOOD WHAT IS CHRO-CHAN'S SECRET?

Shidonii