Its sad to see you leave :(

Wow, What an emotional story! I'm shocked again!

I am so shocked, she is terrible!

This is devastating to read!

So sad and so beautiful. A fantastic twist, amazing characters . Good analyse of their behaviour.

Uh...WTF!?

This was a very interesting story choice and my heart just broke for Edward. I was a little bit incensed at the end because Bella did not deserve Edward! However, that said (and I do stand by that- she did not deserve his love!), the fact that he walked away when given the opportunity to have her back and also the fact that he stood by Elly was very nicely done. I felt somewhat satisfied in his happy ending because however it happened, we readers know that it must have been a genuine love connection and nothing less. And Charlie deserved everything he got and much more, what a horrible way to act!

Whether or not Bella deserved Edward, the complexities of your characters etc are always so mesmerizing. Thank you for always providing solid stories!

Wow, that was a bit of a rollercoaster ride, I'm still unsure what to think about some of it. I really don't understand Edward not telling Bella the truth initially, or him staying with Alice the night he left after Bella found out, or why it took Jane demanding he take action finally. This Edward was very weak and broken I guess. I'm glad they finally found their HEA but I'm not really sure how they got there. A great story that will have me thinking for days to come! Thanks so much for your wonderful writing and for sharing this with us :)

Phew. What a ride this was. You made me feel all the characters ups and downs, flaws and goodness.
I get it. Life doesn't always turn out the way you want it to. The roads you travel get curved and blocked
and down right dangerous. But in the end, if you get to where you need to be...well, there you go, Life.
I won't say getting back with someone that caused such pain that it left you so broken can't and shouldn't happen and that in the end you
forgive them and move beyond it all...it really can and does happen. Love and forgiveness sometimes is all you have and all you need to have...
Thank you for sharing your stories, this one left me thinking big thoughts...

I'm with Edward, she's his daughter no matter what. But open the envelope, I want to know! lol

*jumps up and claps* Good move having Alice arrested. I say make a deal with her, her freedom for
his daughter's custody

Thank goodness for the innocence of a child. It makes you want to be better than you are.

No. That was the right answer to give Bella. I think now he can start to really heal. He took control even
when what he'd ever wanted was right there for the taking. It would have be all sorts of wrong to agree to
such a preposterous deal.

I can't believe Bella really did that, married him but knew it was a mistake even before all hell broke loose. Can it
be she really wasn't the woman Edward thought her to be or is she making all this up to save her dad his
dignity or perhaps help Edward let go of her for once and for all too? She's either trying to be a saint or she's
as horrible as Alice.

OMG could Bella have been herself pregnant and didn't want to add to Edward's shit storm and so made her
own life...and that's why she never filed? She's got to have a good reason for being so distant.