hey can please continue it. its a good one. i dont know whats keepin u from updatin but try ur best. ja ne

Omge. I love it. Please update soon!

Happy belated birthday. I have March birthday but earlier than yours.

Good story. A few comments: I like how you describe all the future characters good start.

Remember to make shorter paragraphs, I noticed people can read easier when the paragraphs are shorter.

A good place to break is after someone speaks.

I read manga but not the one you write about it, however your thoughts are well articulated and you know where you are going.

We all learn by doing, continue writting, study grammar, I do. And you will get better as you go along. I like it this story.

Hey everybody! Thanks so much for the reviews! I absolutely LOVE all of you! I will try to have then next chapter up by next week Friday the latest. I know, late, sorry, but I have exams to study for, and Homework to do so PEACE OUT!

Miki!

Curious as to where this is going *winkwink* and I love Sakura's personality! She is so Kick-ass!

Love Sakura's outfit and personality! Loves me some converse too!(:

Interesting...

this is adoreble! I LOOOVE it , pleaaaase make more 3

Can't wait for your next update :)

I love how Gai-sensei just burst into the gym :)

Update soon!

OMG! You've outdone yourself this time Miki! I LOVE the description of Karin!

Please update soon!

Can't wait to find out more :)

Awesome story can't wait till next chapter! :)

Congrats!