I like your story. I like the way you think about Ed and Winry relationship. I don't really like their child name. But, still fine to me. I hope you make a lot of story about Ed and Tristan. When will you publish another story?

I like this chapter, i love the way you think about Ed and Winry relationship. I like the name of their baby. The conflict make me want to stay and read. I just want to read more about Ed and the baby. Well, that's all my review. When will you published another story again?

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i want to read more of it

HI! to tell you the truth, the fanfic's brilliant..great job ! pls do update...i'm looking forward to it

I wish you'd update this masterpiece of a story

sorry al notebook and are the same thing u cant write with paper, but can with a pen

How about alex or lilly?

That was amazing!

omg i love this fanfic so much ;,) ( i'm crying from how amazing it is)

I like the story so far, I gotta say, the job Edward gets reminds me of the comic I read on deviantart and the way I wanted my sixth, seventh and eighth grade science teachers to be like. Keep up the good work

OUCH MY HEART

Xerxes was actually a Persian King. He ruled at the time when they invaded Greece and got their asses handed to them by the 300 Spartans (like in the movie 300)

nice story i liked it

Hey im not the only one with fingers that have a mind of their own. Your story is not that bad as mine though. Even though mine are mostly Yugioh my fingers tend to make things a little more dramatic in both a good and bad way.
P.S
FMA is my top fav anime but i cant think of anything to write for that one so i just went with my 2nd fav anime and so far that one is going by great. You should read them sometime i think you would like them. Unless you don't like yugioh but who knows really.