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vrani140 chapter 9 . 5/13 continue, please |
Veronica McClure chapter 9 . 7/7/2019 "Conscious" as you can see does not have an "n" in the last syllable. |
Venus914 chapter 9 . 4/30/2019 Wow. I love this story and I rarely read crossovers. |
AxZi chapter 9 . 9/18/2018 Oh no! But think about the Bakura, about the *Bakura.* Anyway, whether you continue soon or not, thanks for writing! Your stories have been really lovely! Let me check whether you have more 3 |
FireDragonX23 chapter 9 . 8/30/2018 Poor Harry. |
James Birdsong chapter 9 . 8/19/2018 Glorious story |
Hortensia chapter 9 . 8/18/2018 Having found this story today, I read it in one go and I really like it. Just too bad you lost your inspiration. This is the second HP crossover with Yu-Gi-Oh I read and now they’re both abandoned… |
KuroHinata chapter 9 . 8/17/2018 Harry just kill yourself. YOu will be nothing but a slave to them. Rather than suffer hell. end it. |
Rachel chapter 9 . 8/17/2018 It says it was updated 4h ago but it's the same chapter...am I delusional? |
SpiedCookie126 chapter 10 . 8/4/2018 In a perfect world I would say take the part-time job and slowly write on the side because debt interest is quite the stick in the mud, but I know this would be quite difficult for people to put their all in a job and their hobbies. I think it's best to take the job and we will wait for you to come back. Writing would be awesome, but who knows if the ad revenue is worth it and if it would succeed. Well, whatever you do in the end I wish you luck and happiness! |
Random Reviewer chapter 10 . 7/29/2018 I personally like Chaturanga the best out of the four ideas as I love En Passant along with your other stories and I like the thought of people making money from things they enjoy so I say go ahead if you want to. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2018 ...CHALLENGE : Fiction M: [Bran S., Daenerys T., ...] Romance / Aventure Bran, arya and Sansa and go back the time is back right just before killing the deserter from the night guard and recovering the wolf-baby, thanks to the power of bran stark helped by the ancient gods to save all their family is the world of the white walker! ps: bran and fall in love with daenerys the first time who saw her in the first timeline. couple: Bran (10 years old) x daenerys (15 years old) Bran takes the power with daenerys after saving him from his brother to pentos before the marriage of khal drogo and recovered the dragon egg Bran s will attack the stepstone with 300 men to retrieve the pirate treasure, his cover to recover daenerys a pentos during King Robert's visit to winterfell. ps: ned refuses to become the king's hand! The Stark family will secretly train Daenerys in Winterfell for a year to govern and fight, before sending him to essos with bran and his powers to help him forbid slavery and conquer the nine free cities : Qarth: New Ghis: Astapor / Yunkaï / Meereen/ volantis /Lys / Myr / tyrosh. she makes her possessions, as well as Vaes Dothrak killing all the khals with his dragon and the Old Valyria which still has many treasures before the Scourge : the scrolls, the books, some vaults full of gold and jewels, magic books, Valyrian steel weapons, armor from dragon houses, dragon eggs and magical power items His army will be composed of 8000 immaculate and 100,000 Dothraki and three dragon, as well as 2000 soldier-guard in training for each city of essos ! ps: bran will be betrothed to daenerys to avoid any pretender who is attracted by the power. During this time north the stark family will fortify winterfell, moat cailin and build a fleet of 200 warships made of ironwood and 20 commercial ship built by the manderly family, with the stark emblem on the veil , and create a permanent army of 15 000 soldier stark with armor, weapon and shield in Valyrian steel, bran discovered the secret with its power ! all his grace to the gold of five millions gold dragons, as well as the ancestral sword of the lannister and targaryen which was the treasure of the pirates, that brandon to recover by attacking the stepstone with 200 men, its cover to recover daenerys has pentos during King Robert's visit to winterfell. ps: ned refuses to become the king's hand! Bran will give both swords to Jon and Daenerys, and will sell the ancestral sword of lannister to tywin lannister. the northern fleet asserts its supremacy at sea and devotes its time effectively to the fight against pirates, and slavery that has infected the sea. The family stark will kill the traitors that are: bolton, frey, lannister, greyjoy, Alliser Thorne, Janos Slynt, Ilyn Payne, ect... Ned stark reveals the truth to jon and all his family when brandon and sansa going back time and tells them about the future . Ned will negotiate with Lady Olenna Tyrell the engagement of : Robb x Margaery ? ps: Robb will open a citadel for the people in the north! Ned also informs Robert, Stannis and Renly the true kinship of the children of cersei. Ned informed of Baelish's actions by visions of Bran's past, confused him with the lords of the North and the Val and executed him ! Ned orders his bannermens to conscript all valid men and boys aged 10 to 60 for combat training, it also orders that all women and girls in the Northern population be trained and equipped to fight the White Walkers. Jon will send behind the wall to make peace with mance rayder is the people-free, and make them pass the wall. ps: couple jon x ygrid Jon does not want to become king but becomes the queen's hand. jon will inherit dreadfort from ned, the twins will give to bryden tully. Bran will inherit harrenhal who will rebuild him to only half of his greatness for him and daenerys Syrio Forel becomes girl Stark's Master of Arms in winterfell hired by eddard Stark ! In the crypt of Winterfell at the last level there is: the sword Lightbringer, the throne of the kings of winter, 2 dragon egg, ... The king robert dies in port-real, and he is going to have a new war between the kingdoms. Viserys targaryen angry at daenerys for running away and khal drogo going to send jorah Mormont looking for him. couple: Robb/Talisa M : Sansa/jojen R : Rickon/lyanna Mormont : Jon/Ygrid : Arya/Gendry: Bran/daenerys/Margaery Lives except: Stark family, Shireen baratheon, Osha, Myrcella baratheon: tyrion lannister: family sands: Roslin tully (born frey): mance rayder, Tormund, Karsi, ygrid, all the giants, the children of the forest, women and children of the people-free, ect ... Death: Family Baratheon, Family lannister: Bolton, Frey, Fer-born, melisandre, gregor clegane, Mestre Pycelle, Viserys targaryen, Petir baelish, lisa arryn: Viserys targaryen, Daario Naharis, the great sparrow his disciple is their destroyed temple : The Thenns and 12 000 savage men : 65 000 Westerland soldiers, 20 000 ironborn soldiers: 20 000 soldiers of the reach: 25 000 stormlands soldiers: 35 000 dothraki warrior: 60 000 white walker: 20 000 golden company, tens of thousands of mercenaries of pirates and slavers and criminal, ... ... SOMEONE TO TAKE THE CHALLENGE ? |
Blitza chapter 10 . 7/24/2018 Do both. The part time job will be immediate coin in your pocket while the writing is your passion and an eventual payout that could help you later in life. Also, are you a crafty person? I know a few easy, cheep ways to make money if you think you can do some work with your hands. Also, it's free to publish on amazon once you actually finish a story. It'll go out as a kindle book and they'll take a percentage for every copy sold. With your fans here I'm sure you could get a few immediate buyers from people who already enjoy your writing. Wattpad is too difficult to make a living off of. Do you draw any? |
Guest chapter 5 . 7/22/2018 Harry is so naive that this story is so cringy. How does he forget that he is now in a different place and why is it so not normal to see magic? (Harry's reaction and being to slow to notice things is cringy) My God he acts like those stupid girls that get a harem of hot anime guys. |
Rotture chapter 10 . 7/22/2018 i think pursuing writing as a source of income is a great idea! also, i love the premise of your first idea, the isekai story. that's the kind of story I've read and loved and supported in the past, and the kind of story i can see myself supporting in the future |