nice! i liked reading your story. and the way that some love can be filled with poison and hate but if you truly love someone then love will always win!
great piece of writing keep em coming!

A brilliant piece of writing, I enjoyed reading this immensely :)

urgh, this was absolutely completely sadistic...in the best way possible. i mean, their relationship is so crooked. i don't know what it's like in the actual mv books, but at least in here, i just wanted to scream because their relationship was so messed up. you did a fabulous job of portraying the dysfunctionality of clane, so kudos there.

and of course, the writing itself was marvelous too. great descriptions, especially of emotions, which not many writers can do. and i loved the very end, which made me feel weird - again, in a good way. their relationship is just so strange.

great job, bicky.

xx

Wow, Vicky, that was amazing!

Um, Clane needs to be killed with shovels, but I really loved this! It was so well written, and urgh it was just perfect, okay?

I loved how they were in this destructive relationship, and they hated each other, but they loved each other too, but Shivvi and Myrnin would be better for them. [Even though I prefer Miclaire, but]

Ugh and then the last bit was just beautiful, and Claire js going to say she cheated, and they'll break up.

This was perfectly angsty & amazing. Great job, Vicky! &hearts

That's a shame, I must admit I like them. Especially when Shane was prepared to let her go for her sake. Not bad, keep writing

Omg crying. I reallyreally honestly am. This is the most acidic relationship asdfghjkl and you just and i just and i am crying because i still love them even though you wrote them like this actually because ypu wrote them like this

ISNT IT HEARTBREAKING HOW WRONG BUT RIGHT THEY ARE FOR EACHOTHER I JUST LOVE IT :') okay. okay. constructivw criticism; um it was perfect and ily.

No spelling and grammar mistakes, written flawlessly, the wntire thing made me want to burst into tears after the first few paragraphs and even though it'a breaking up my OTP, you still showed their characters so well. Sam was paricularly IC, i honestly just loved this whole thing

I love Clane, because they're probably not going to have a happy ending a lot of the time, since Shane is so volatile and Claire is, well, not. I can't even begin to describe how well you did their relationship here like i am catatonic and nothing is making swnse and just yeah

ILY FOR WRITING THIS FOR ME YOU ARE THE BEST OK THE ABSOFREAKINGLUTE BEST

Always,

Summer

wow i love ur style of writing, this is amazing :D