Loved it can’t wait for sequel

Okay so you probably have figured this out by now but just because Reid was in an abusive relationship doesn't mean he would have to be gay. Men can be in abusive relationships with women it's not as common but it can and does still happen.

"Autism people can barely talk I can believe that Reid has ashburge syndrome."

I am not one to be really judging about proper spelling give thanks to spell check . However it is spelt Aspergers Syndrome if you are going to use something many people including me are dionogised with please spell it right . Also it should be Autistic people , not autism people . Might as well correct the grammar of the sentence to .

I loved the chapter, and the way you set up the plot. Really, I do. I just have one thing. You said Reid may have autism, and referred to him as "High level". Now, I won't argue the point about Reid's autism, because it is possible, plausible, even, but the terminology is off. Autism is referred to on a spectrum. "High level" would indicate that it was severe, with a lack of communication skills, like Sammy from 6x16. And even then, you would say he was high on the spectrum, or that he was severe case, or something of that sort. You would usually refer to an autistic person as high or low functioning, as opposed to high or low level. I really do love the story, and keep it up. Sorry if I seem nitpicky, it's just that my mother is a doctor and three of my cousins are autistic.

ashburge syndrome."
As someone who as this Syndrome this offends me it is spelt Aspergers if you are going to use something like this please learn to spell it right. Thanks .

I really like the story, but you should really learn the fine art of commas. Many of your sentences are grammatically incorrect because you don't use commas.

I loved this. It made me cry because of the bastard Jason. Amazing job. The only issue I had with it was that Jason did not get a trial ... every us citizen has the right to a fair trial. Other than that, I loved this. Really good plot line etc.

You need to get your facts right.

If you are going to write about a mental disorder at LEAST figure out how to spell it.

"Autism people can barely talk I can believe that Reid has ashburge."

It's not 'autism people' its 'AUTISTIC people.'
AND
it's 'Aspergers' not 'Ashburge.'

This bothers me so much.

sequelllll

The story was good. However, in the future, I would recommend getting a proofreader.

Really like this story, glad i found it- you're writing is so good! And i love the relationship between Reid and Morgan :)

You have a lot of spelling, grammar, and punctuation mistakes. But, otherwise it is a good story so far.

OH I LOVED IT! I CRIED, I LAUGHED! ITS GREAT!

you really need to work on your spelling
it is receipts not recites
and Asperger syndrome not ashburger

this is ok but a little wierd.