eh i failed to see a reason why would even the tailed beast have any interese on Minato, but meh your story

Just binged this story. I mean I see no issue with the story or plot. Only issue I have had was spelling but didnt scare me away. Keep up the good work and cant wait to see where it goes

Well. I hope you manage to cover the errors and come off better for it.
Good luck

Other then the errors it's a great story. Hope u finish it and looking forward to the new chapters other then just the rewritten chapters

1. I love this story.
2. I can understand some points, the rest is bs.
3. I've read stories where the grammar is so bad I got headaches.
4. This is your story, it's a fiction. It's not all canon.
5. I like the diversity.
6. It's my hope you don't delete the story.
7. How many great stories have they made to make such criticism.
8. I wish for you to have a better day.
9. If you need someone to chat with I'm open to it.

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blah blah blah, author's note about whiners. I'mma just read the fic. Been so long, I'mma probably need to re read it.
Also, when people want you to do something like another fic does, especially for plot points, don't. Steer away from tropes, that's how the cliches start happening.

well, I think your story is amazing

super

Great chapter xD Cant wait for more

Your option to pair one taild beast with minato is retarded and how did miya become secret lovers with naruto if they Didn't do anything together to monarch of a harem and how the fuck dose he have a harem if they dont do anything together you fucking moron and you rote in the fic that there "MATE'S/LOVER'S"

Awesome I like how its come! Can we get a list of the girls that are gonna be with naruto to get a better idea lol cant wait for the next update keep up the great work.

I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work boss!

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

well this story went from gold to the shitter in just 3 chapters...