pretty good story but to be honest i felt that the end was rushed but a pretty good story beside that

Nice idea but too disjointed and rushed. Hermione has vowed not to be with anyone but after one meeting with Remus, whom she hadnt seen for at least a year, she falls in love and decides to be with him forever? They have sex, she sees him two weeks later, and they get married the same day with all her friends and family present?

This sounds more like a summary or outline rather than an actual story.

hey just read the entire story and loved it! But its kinda short and ended sooooo quickly.

ahhh... don't run

nice

I liked it, but I think it went ended really quickly. Like, describing the ceremony would've been a good touch and maybe how the cottage looked like. All in all it's a pretty cool story.

very good

Please update soon! :)

Yay, she accepted the role! I was half expecting her to figure out the spell... don't know why...

UPDATE

You have just made my day I have been waiting for ages to read this please keep going it's great

excellent

Awww, I'm flattered. i am. You made me blush. This chapter was great. It was nice to know that you weren't going to leave this as a cliff hanger. (It sorta looked like you were going to)Anyways update soon. Hermione apologizing, the idea makes me giggle.

very good

excellent,

I can't wait to read Moony's reaction

update soon please