cliffy? i had a lot of issues with this story but you did good

Anzu is so cool! Does Ryou have a crush on her? I hope Anzu can handle it. Are Yugi and Yami demons or Angels?

Do you plan to update?!

Awesome story! I loved it - and I really hope you write a sequel.

The only thing I didn't like (and this is just me being picky, I really did enjoy your story :D) is the overly used italics.

But I loved the characters, and the idea of Ryou as an Angel - as if he wasn't already adorable enough XD!

I look forward to reading more of your stories :)

I don't even know where to start. I really like that you have like, a whole verse built around here. That things are deeper and there are more things to find out and poke into. I love the dynamic that Ryou and Anzu have as partners. And the 'partnership' that Bakura, Yalik, and TKB have.

"Did you hurt yourself when you fell from Heaven to see Us?...People don't actually say things like that!"

I really liked this line! TKB is delightfully mad throughout, with his pompadour, use of the royal 'we' and such. But I like how it butts against Anzu here.

Question, was the prince Yuugi or Atem? I figure Atem but I'm not really sure.

I really liked that Ryou was like, afraid of Miho. That just strikes me as being hilarious. And Jou and Honda were fun here, especially when the show up in the last scene. They're just clueless but still ready to kick ass.

Okay, and that last paragraph? I AM WIBBLING ALL OVER. Seriously, it fits them so well. They're in this horrible moment and there they go, cracking jokes and being morbid little fucks, and just being adorable idiots.

Also, the desk fu. I am so amused. And I want more. Because this is amazing. Great work!

That was a fun read! Definitely original in concept and execution - and - POMPADOUR!

There's so much going on here, and I love it! Great inclusion of multiple characters, elements and ideas. I love the dialogue, it's snappy in all the right ways!

Fantastic, I must say. Good luck!

This was fantastic! Amazing, tropey goodness. I loved everything about this story, it was such an enjoyable, fun read. Great job! Thank you for writing this! :DD

This was an interesting and unexpected AU, but I found it refreshing and enjoyed it. Good job!

I loved this. I don't know how you do it, but I'm totally captivated by your writing and your stories. This was just great, it was a ton of fun to read and I loved your approach to the pairing and the characters. It kept my attention throughout, and if it had been another 5k, I'd have gladly kept on reading.

(One thing that confused me, though; I loved the alternate names for Marik/TKB/Yami B, but in the dialogue you still have Ryou calling him 'Malik' and Pegasus using 'Bakura-boy,' and I couldn't tell if that was intentional or not? Kinda threw me)

Keep up the great work! D

~Jess (My Misguided Fairytale)

Cool concept! Just seemed a bit pushed together. Maybe if it was an epic! Great job and good luck!

This was...I don't even know how you'd describe it other than AWESOME. I'm not a huge fan of the magical girl genre, but the high school shenanigans more than made up for it. The pompadour! The garlic! The boob! asdfasdf

This was not what I expected at all judging by the title and description. Absolutely hilarious. Love it.