Aww hell Aoko. Awesome story.

Woah, I've never seen a Phantom-Aoko story. So sad, but I love it! More, please!

O.o Creepy. Did Aoko get thieving lessons? that would be neat... What next for the Phantom Lady?

That was certainly sobering... And kind of a surprise, a pleasant one at that. Lesson learned: Check the Characters.

For the first couple of paragraphs, you totally were stringing me on- thinking it really was Chikage. That's a good thing though! _

I like the plotline very much... Very dark, but hey, this couple is just ASKING for angst. this would be tough to pull off for Aoko, so my hat goes off to you for that. Crap, no I have to buy a hat DX

A lot of people often try to go a bit too dark without building it up first. That makes it uncomfortably OC, and you can't blame insanity for everything. But you, ylvglo-san, did very well, especially for such a tough character like Aoko to turn her erm, bad. Plausible and descriptive, I would totally buy the scenario. Is there any more of this universe? The plunnies are sugar high in my head.

Like I said, it was descriptive, but I almost wish it was a bit larger, if only to build up some suspense. More sensory detail couldn't hurt, it makes it a bit more rounded, and forces the reader to dig a little deeper. Odd as this sounds, I suggest keeping us in the dark a bit more, and not be so direct.

But, you know that's me. It all end up to your syntax and style, but I'm happy as is. I love it when the characters go off the the deep end!

Oh, and thanks for putting this in the MK section- there honestly needs to be more fics in her! Zana Charleson and I plan to populate this category- wanna join in?

Thanks for the one-shot,and I hope I didn't offend! If so, I'm so sorry! Oh and sorry for this monster- i'm notorious for huge reviews. But this fic should really have more- the only reason I'm late is because of testing.

Hope to see more from you soon! (I say this in place of "update soon")

Lol (Lots of Love)

~Daydreamer1412