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I loved it!

Very very cute! Great job!

very much like your handle on the characters' inner and actual voices, fred

Loved every word, again! ! Awesome fic! !

Hard to believe that this was your first Sherlock fic. You captured not only the character voices, but also explained what may have happened next between the character in a way which is so natural it could easily have been in an extended version of the episode. Loved Sherlock's being caught out a bit for having taken his deductions to a too intrusive level.

Loved it! !

Lovely. Absolutely lovely. It was a difficult night of adjusting for both of them. After the giddy high they both giggled through when walking away from the crime scene earlier that night, they still had to live through their first night as flat mates. I love that Sherlock was taken by surprise with John again, recognizing that John was different from people he was used to dealing with. I also liked how you pulled into tighter focus the fact that John was very loyal very quickly to Sherlock. An immediate recognition of kindred spirits. Love it.

I enjoyed this. Very Well written. Thanks!

You know you never marked this complete? You should, I almost didn't click it because I thought it was unfinished. I'm glad I did, you're very good at writing them.

This is a great story! I feel like both Sherlock & John are very in-character. This is the beginning of a beautiful friendship. )

keep writing, it's good so far. Loyalty is a strong part of their friendship.

Lovely. You captured them both both beautifully. I like how their relationship is weak, but still Undeniably there

Love this! So beautifully written :)

I applaud you again on your characterization. It was flawless; I could perfectly see and hear John and Sherlock sitting there in their pajamas having a heart-to-hard drive. I empathize so much with John, and it's nice to see him find a friend.

Great fic. Many kudos!