Pleasepleaseplease make more of this! like, a side story or something with just a hint of lemon, to show how & when she became pregnant and stuff. u r awesome! plz continue this!

Epic story! So good!

Please make a seconds one I loved it. It is really nice because it is not so bad like the anime ones.

please show what an ice spanking is

I loved the whole entire book3, so worth reading!

I guess Marshall was a bit of a jerk in bad little boy but there should be a love triangle! Between fiona and Marshall and FP! That would be so cool! This was a great chap! Marshall should be in more chaps that would be interesting. Does Marshall still like Fi? But just keeps his distance?

Are u gonna continue...?

Totally please continue. I am really loving this fan fiction right now . PLEASE CONTINUE

Is it not Aaa and not Ooo? Anyway story is going on really nice

PLEASE CONTINUE IT!

This is the best story ever! Oh My Glob! It's just that I love how you gave each character its own personality and how you had a epolog to go with it!
This story was just awesomesauce!

Awww so good :P please update! Or make a sequel :)

FP and Fionna sitting in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G!
LOL!

OH MY GLOB WRITE MORE PLS PLS PLS YOU LEFT ON A GLOBING CLIFHANGGER!

Hey it's Lilly again this epilogue was simply amazing! Please make a sequence to this and if you already have please tell me where I can find it! So excited to read it!

Love, Lilly