Your stories are really awesome! I don't quite follow BW but you left quite an impression with Cilan. His lines are hilarious! The Pearlshipping parts are nothing short of perfect. Thanks for writing this!

This was very well done.. you captured the characters and their interactions very well.. Ash and Dawn forever !

AMAZING you made Cilan be so awesome I laughed so hard and the way ash and dawn confessed was so realistic amazing story

Just want you to know, I'm a diehard pearlshipper, so this fic, I undoubtedly loved! It was really well written. And you mastered the characters well. I think Cilan is the most underrated character of the series, so I'm glad for the credit you give him

I might as well just copy and paste my failed hero review. Great fic, I have oficially become a pearlshipper.

Very nicely done! I liked all the character interaction, particularly Cilan and Iris' input. It was a sweet ending, too. I enjoyed it.

Very Sweet!112244!

What a great story! One of my all time favourites for sure!

Lovely and funny story. Cilian and Iris where both very well casted. At leas I never felt the urge to choke Cilian to death... That's an achievement. This ending however was a bit rushed. It's not bad, but you could have done it much more slower and let feelings flow.
But overall it was a nice story. Thank you.

This is so good :3

I found this to be somewhat funny. Cilan was, no doubt, the best character within this story, but the fact that he was the main source of hilarity for me was a bit depressing. Iris was just the bro person, and the romantic build wasn't all that exciting. Despite that, it's a decent read if anyone ever needs a moment. Overall, a 3 out of 5 from generosity; you can probably guess why.

As Cilan/Dento described Dawn's cheers, I'll say' "I...It's so beautiful..." I really is.

Great, funny story... It would have been better if they went back to iris and cilan after their first kiss and have ash say that they actually did make it to 1st base

OMG! I'm am crying! Dawn and Ash getting married! This is sooooo CUTE!

This whole story was Awsome haha everyone that I know on here read it! But the marry thing was not as good as the rest of the thing it kind of ruined it for me but other then that this story was really really good haha!