And there is Gwen being a bitch again, she was the intruder. Basically that is Jack's home because he lives at the hub. I can't stand her. Loved your story by the way, especially when Jack said he loves Ianto.

Could use a comb-over by a beta, but the story was sweet, believable and had a good pace. And a nice writing style.

ah, nice one...

So lovely, thank you for that little interlude, I can just picture it all in my head as you write it. Very well put together.

Loved Jack's parting words, especially after all of his dissembling earlier!

I loved it!

Ugh, the ending... Brilliant :)