Hey, new reader here, and a writer as well. When I read your story, I noticed many things. You're creative, and you have amazing ideas, which I adore. However, it'd be best if you proofread a little more to catch the mistakes. I found a few errors. While Reader me enjoyed every single bit, writer me couldn't help but spot the few mistakes. That's the only advice I have. Otherwise, keep up the good work. You just got a new follower.

While the writing quality of your story is good in terms of spelling only, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:

"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."

Please remove all detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed like Archive Of Our Own.

People are stupid i love minanaru and i love your storys.

help I can't find mpreg minanaru

Burn in Hell.

...I.. don't know if I hate Minato more, or Naruto here... Eh... I hate both of them :/ There's so much drama...and sometimes both of them are stupid with their reasons. Anger makes a person think irrationally I get it, but Minato is just plain stupid...

I love this I hope you get back into minanaru but in the mean time ehheheehehhhhhhwhwhwhwhwhwhhahahahaahhshwhhahahaahhhhhhmammmwwwhhhahhahaahahahahhahaah KHR YAOI HERE WE COME!

that was good keep it coming

I don't know if you are still active and will read this but I want you to know this was beautiful.

This was so beautifully written. I screamed, cried and squeeled in my bed at 2 am while reading this. The plot was perfect and it is by far the best MinaNaru story I have ever read.

It is hard to find good fanfics of this ship which are not all about plotless sex. But this had so many emotions in it that one does give zero shits that these two are father and son (I don't care anyway they are OTP for life).

I also loved how you involved Kushina and didn't just drop her aside like Minato would stop loving her.

I want to thank you for blessing me with this cute, smutty and all in all perfect piece of writing of yours.

I really hope you will come to read this someday

well...the excessive use of the word pussy and is actually quite a turn off. so yeah..dont think I am able to continue reading this.
nice plot and pairing though. not often you see a minato/naruto pairing

I sort of dissagree with your choice, I would have liked it more if naruto still hated him more, minato did hit him and hurt him like that afterall...
But whatever. It still good.

Dont listwn to them you are amazing keep updating i love all your MinaNaru stories especially this one.

One of the best minanaru stories I've read!

A good story! I like it. Looking forward to more!

The nightmare naruto had was heart breaking and so emotional of what minato said "especially demon child" i teared up alittle and got really emotional. LOL and how they hugged at the end soo cute! It was heart warming please continue this fictional story about the two of them and dont stop!