My heart broke when Sesshomaru slapped Rin...

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Hi Temari. Great work! The plot is excelente! It's one my favorites. Loved it, loved it, loved it! :D

A thrilling story.

This story really had my full attention...I grabbed me in so many so see sesshomaru and rin...hell everybody play different roles then the norm.

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I love the plot. Not a big fan of Sesshomaru and Inuyasha not being brother but I like how you changed things around. How are Sesshomaru and Kanna related? I got a little lost on that part. Love the story thought and keep up the work.

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I wish there was a closure for Koga and Kikyo, but it wasn't so bad. I like that there's a mention of the kids and their love lives without making it sound like their part of the story is taking over too much, as those tend to happen in some fics with fan babies. :P

Sesshoumaru also never voiced out his love, but it was pretty obvious, anyway, and it's touching to see him showing it through his actions.

Great story. :)

OMG OMG I KNEW IT! He's his brother! But I wasn't so sure if you'd go to such extremes! WAAAAH!

This is one twisted family. The bloodline is all mixed up. XD

*furiously clicks next*

Okay, it seems that my earlier assumption with Kagura is proving to be false... What exactly happened to her? I was thinking... woman traits, hmm... her boobs were removed? LOL!

The scene with Sess and his child was very heartwarming. That, and when he cradled the dead fetus. :)

Eeeek that arrow hurt! XD

So... they were married during Rin's labor? (Or was there a time jump there?) Well... that's strange, but the presentation of it all was so good, like finding pieces of a puzzle that fit so perfectly. I didn't think that the accident's side effects was the cause of his stoic attitude, but it was a good fit. It's just sad that he had to endure many, many years with Kagura before he would meet Rin.

Also, LE GASP! Rin is the daughter of the first wife! LOLOLOLOL! Well, Sessy, Kagome wifey just made her dream for you come true! Hehehehehe.

I'm glad you corrected the 30 years ago info, but I wish the actual chapter was edited... I really thought there was a serious mistake. Glad that's cleared up now. Another thing is if the accident happened after Kagome (and given that Kagome is already pregnant and they never had sex), then Sess can't complain that Kagome never gave him a child. So Kagura is the sole 'problem' here. Anyway, forgive my rambling. I can let this go because I am enjoying the story so far! :3 :3

Last but not the least, it's so rare to find a fic where Sess and Inu aren't brothers, and Inu is older than Sess! That's a surprise!

*eagerly clicks "next" even though it's 4:23 AM*

Lots of typos... and its really confusing me. lol

:at the ending: Say whaaaaaat!? xD