A thoroughly absorbing enjoyable tale! Though a little cruel to leave us hanging at such a moment! Thank goodness there's a sequel!

Please write a sequel!

Where is the sequel?

wonderful.

:O ...how could you do that? NOOO! :( Right, I'm going to look for the sequel to this amazing story now. Seriously, its brilliant :D Apart from the sad ending...at least that makes it kind of different from other stories :P

oh my, I love this story lol its been ahwhile since you wrote it

OMG! How could you have done that? I'm going search your story list now crossing my fingers that there is a sequel. But I will tell you on the other hand. It was still a damn good story. And even having an ending like that was well written, but oh I really hope you have a sequel up or I may cry. Thank you again for your story.

Yep... first thing I do when I get back from my meeting is jump on here to finish this fantastic story. I wasn't expecting them to be pulled apart like that. I wasn't even thinking about his side of the wish. You never cease to surprise me. I'm so sad that it's all coming to an end now. (pouts)

I feel so defeated that I must go to sleep. I am so floored that this story seemed to not get much attention when posted. I think I'm going to attempt to change that. I had forgotten about Toby telling her not to wish it away. This story is just unbelievable. Everyone that likes Laby FanFic should be reading this story. I wish so much that you knew I was reading and how much I adore your story. I am completely breathless with your story. The emotions you pull, the stage you set. There is no amount of compliments I could give you to truly express your talent and my love for this story. So do this, think of the best compliment you would have loved to hear for this story... that's what I'm saying.

Wow... do you have any idea how good this story is? I am absolutely loving it. I'm so mad cause I need to go to bed and I can't, I don't want to. I want to finish this story... but I won't make it, but one more and off I go. This is just an amazing story. Your writing talent is quite impressive.

Hahaha... it makes you wonder which side Kyra is on. Perhaps her own. This whole story is so interesting. Extremely unique.

Whew... talk about an emotional roller coaster. I have to admit when I first saw this story I didn't have much hope for it, but I find myself pleasantly surprised. So Jareth is enjoying her misery. Can't say I blame him.

Wow...Kyra really did mess up. Please do a sequel! I really do not enjoy cliffhangers...well...it's not really a cliffhanger is it? heh. It was really good and I hope you do do a sequel!

Peace Out!

~DayDreamer16820

I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! I'm reading the sequel now but this was just so good! Definately one i would go back to and read over and over! It's wicked awesome! Thanks so much for sharing this! ;)

Agh!