| Reviews for The Master |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 4/12 This is really good and I would like to see more |
| Guest chapter 13 . 4/27/2019 I personally think you should do a time skip that way you could slowly reveal Naruto’s new power with it being a surprise and that way you can be a little more creative with his abilities. |
 lachyfrost chapter 1 . 12/27/2018 I have to ask why is no one questioning he, his a 13 kid that looks 10 going all this shit and none the clients are questioning it and his acting way to old for his age like really but overall it's a pretty good fic just those little this I think you could fix up |
| lachyfrost chapter 1 . 12/27/2018 there are few things I don't like, one is he sounds like his 17 years old doing all the stuff his going and your making him grow in power way to quickly like when he took the Canon he should have been out of, honestly his body should have been destroyed but |
| penguinrocks chapter 12 . 12/20/2018 This is a great story overzealous Deku! I hope you come back to finish this story since this is one of the better stories I’ve read with a rinnegan Naruto in the fairy tail world. I hope everything is going well and someday this story can be finished |
| Starscape91 chapter 13 . 12/5/2018 This is a great story I hope you decide to finish it someday. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 5/23/2018 Good story please update, oh yeah I think you should do the time skip |
| quenless king chapter 13 . 5/15/2018 please update again |
| moffalopalizam chapter 13 . 5/12/2018 do the skip |
| I Are Panda chapter 13 . 2/4/2018 sorrow |
| snorlax285 chapter 13 . 11/30/2017 Great story but sad that you couldn't continue |
| Blue chapter 13 . 11/7/2017 Update? |
| Super Saiyan chapter 13 . 8/16/2017 seven year timeskip |
| Poe489 chapter 13 . 8/15/2017 This story have to be update |
| PenPanther chapter 13 . 7/17/2017 Hey guy, you've really improved as you were writing this. Think you can write some more? |
