Just finished re-reading this. This was one of my favorite stories back when I read it in 2012-2013, so reading through it again was nice - it was one of those things that really stood out in that time of my life. I miss that era of MLP where stories like these were a big thing and everybody was reading them, and it's a shame that I'll never experience something like that again, but oh well.

OMG, that was the best mlp fanfiction I've ever seen! ( oops, read, sorry.) I decided to only review at the very end, sorry bout that, but still! Soooooooo good!

i thought this was story was good. while the theme isn't original with 'human(s) comes to equestria because of aliens' it was good enough for me to basically read it all in one day and seeing as there is 47 chapters thats saying something. while i do have on majore complaint, the alines seemed pretty pointless they just seem to be there to drive the plot along and we never hear about them it wouldve been nice to see whats his face allied with the aliens or is an alien conquering in the later chapters the mane 6 seemed to have just dissappeared. also what was up with fluttershy being tortured seriously dude that was messed up although thank you for the heads the diamond dogs were in leagie with whats his face? why? they seemed there to just torture fluttershy which really had no bearing on the plot. i know i seem a little harsh but i really did like this story. 7/10

dude why the fluttershy torture?

something i notice about alien wars with humans being stuck in equestria and saving the ponies is they allways get stuck in the everfree forest and a manticore attacks. why is taht? do these type of fanfictions have a sort of unsaid code to making these alien invasion human in equestria stories? i didnt even know theyre were so many of these types of stories. i like the idea though

dude its battle gloves on not battle glove on and what kind of word is maim and also its for not fir okay you don't know English that good

dude its we lost one of our guys not we lost one of guys alright that's it

dude its as she shed a tear not as she said a tear and also you are so bad at making sense even i can make way better sense than you

oh and also its stops up not stacks up

dude its his mouth not his month once again make sense in you're spelling

dude its gets whipped not get whipped okay work on that

uh dude its winning not wining alright and you did a really awesome job on these chapters i'm quite impressed

dude its freeing the hostages not freeing the hostiles okay you are so bad at making sense in a story chapter like this one -.-

dude there's in error its as she not as he okay learn how to make sense in the story

this is good writing right here

love it