nyaw, I can tell this is probably going to be a combination of sexyness, adorableness, and drama...ness.

Aww! CUTE! A lot of people don't know that England (the actual character) can't swim, so it's really cool that you made an AU about it.(I love AUs so much) I'm a FrUK kind of girl, but I still can't wait for more chapters! Please update soon!

Poor Arthur! Bad Alfred! You don't throw people in pools like rag dolls! D:

(Loving the story so far! Keep it going!) 3

Mm, swimming. Oh yes, I remember being on swim team. 34 second forward crawl, if I do recall. Not very impressive, I suppose, but I was faster than my mates.

Anywho. I am looking forward to seeing where this goes. I love swimming, and it's fun to see Alfred as passionate about the sport as I am xD Even though I hate that Artie can't swim.

so mean...

I love this story! Keep on writing.

Wow you are such a good writer! I Loved this so much it was so good i didn't want it to end..so sad when it did :( Hope you update soon though it is a great story and your a great writer!:D

Wowy-wow wow. Someone's got an awesome story. What did I tell you? :)

OMG this is one of my most favorite fanfics ever! Please please please please please update soon! I LOVE IT SO MUCH OMG you portray their characters so perfectly!:D

But seriously, please update soon! I love this so much~

Haha poor Arthur, you almost drowned! XD

Aww, poor Artie :c Can't even swim. Al cheated, then goes around and does that? ...revenge. Revenge!

Story's going EPICLY so far, in my opinion. Continue soon! :D

Poor Artie D: Really Alfred can be such a jerk sometimes, without even realising it. I really like him but I wanna hit him right now :C I really wonder if his plan is going to work. And I'm kind of looking forward to the day Arthur finds out that he cheated XD Even if the whole mess brings them together in the end, right? :)

I really love your story Keep up the great work :D If you don't notice your own mistakes, maybe you should let someone proofread it ;)

By the way there are many nice people here on :D I only signed up here to review and talk to others. You don't have to be shy about replying

I love this story so much now X3! Can't wait for more!

I laughed so hard when Alfred used Mattie instead of himself. What a cheat. XD

Oh my gosh.

Alfred, you little CHEAT! How dare you! Arthur's going to have a fit when he finds out! Good God, have mercy on your soul!

...But it's still so very funny.

Continue! :D