| Reviews for Lackluster |
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   sarahpuryear chapter 18 . 5/31 This was such a good story! |
| sarahpuryear chapter 10 . 5/31 Someone save Al! |
| Peachlin chapter 14 . 5/9 I feel that this chapter was inaccurate when it came to the trial. I understand that he's a general in the military, but multiple people witnessed Hinze trying to kill Ed. That on it's own should have been plenty to put him away. On top of that, the medical report had evidence of sexual abuse. When the doctors examined him, they should have taken DNA and figured out who had raped him. There was plenty of evidence to put him away. I think the only thing that would change if Ed testified is the length of the sentence. That being said, I have really enjoyed this story so far. |
| OrangeSunset1701 chapter 18 . 5/2 This was absolutely incredible to read! My heart was hurting for both Ed and Roy. I loved how Roy transformed from the senior officer to the protective caretaker. And I literally air punched when Roy backhanded Hinze. I loved the ending. I love this story! |
| Crazyotakugirl123 chapter 18 . 4/17 thank you |
| Liz chapter 18 . 3/28 Oh you’re my bastard just a adorable little line. I had a weird cab driver side something like “ you can use a flashlight as a weapon talk about creepy I was super sure he be like the guy who was abused Ed but he was not. |
| DaylightDark chapter 18 . 3/3 "You're my bastard." This was amazing, really. I love it! Definetly this is one of my favourites fanfics of FMA. The plot was good, your writing was excellent, and the story amazing. Thanks for writing this 3 (And sorry, idk speak english very well) |
| ArriatheDragon chapter 13 . 1/17 "I don't really know either. I'm just kinda winging my new favourite quote and you can bet your buttons I'm using it everyone I look like I know what I'm doing, but actually don't. |
| ArriatheDragon chapter 9 . 1/16 The way you announce your disclaimers is almost better than the book itself. Almost. |
| Dark Lady of Silence chapter 18 . 5/3/2019 Hello, I loved the story and the fact that even when a lot lf characters were in it it was mainly Ed/Roy centric. You did a great job since I could totally imagine the characters with this behaviour, and the plot was quite interesting too. I had the urge to keep reading this even at job, which I probably shouldn't have done, but did anyway. :P This one went straight to favorites the moment I was done reading. Keep going. Cya! |
| Clairdetoile chapter 18 . 3/28/2019 Thank you for this beautiful story! I like it very much, and read it very quickly! And I liked all of it. |
| AdamantiumDragonfly chapter 18 . 1/6/2019 I love this story so much! It has everything and your writing just gives it a special sparkle that just isn't found anywhere else! thank you so much for writing this! |
| GunsAndMagic chapter 17 . 9/1/2018 It won't let me comment on the last chapter again, so here: I wanted to reread this today, and I am so glad I did. It is just as wonderful as the first time. I love this fic! A characterization and plotting, and a great ending. 3 |
| GunsAndMagic chapter 18 . 8/9/2018 Cute and amazing ending. I love this fic! It has huge emotional depth and a great plot. The progression is perfect, and it pulled me in completely. A 3 3 3 |
| sparklybutterfly42 chapter 18 . 7/19/2018 *sob* this is SO good. All the feels and so well done. I was craving some FMA fam and I got it. Thanks so much! |
