I am deeply confused about Harry just, uh, getting to know literally everything about Alex somehow. Magic, I guess, which would totally make sense if like, I hadn't read the books, but whatever who knows.

This story was really Harry-centric as a guest had pointed out, which is why I was quite bothered by it. Not that the story was bad. I rather liked it. Harry was a git, though, unless it was your intention. Alex didn't appear to have any balls whatsoever to stand up for himself. Considering how long he spent spying and whatnot, I'd imagine he would've toughened up by the time he met Harry. Give Alex some credit and backbone and all would be fine.

~Tear

I enjoyed this story. Thank you. BTW...did Harry ever end up going back to his therapy?

This is great! I love it. Great ending, I'm glad that Harry and Alex are friends. I'd love to see a oneshot or something of another of their adventures, maybe one in Alex's world. But anyway, great job. :)

Funny story - I liked it. Would have liked a bit of resolution with the therapist bit (considering it takes up pretty much the entire first half of the fic), but otherwise it was pretty good. It was blatantly Harry Potter-centric, though. As a HP fan, I liked it, but I imagine it would be annoying to big fans of Alex Rider. Thanks for the enjoyable fic!

*cackles*

Wauw, great story. especially the end. It was fun.

just want to let you know that that last line where her Harry mentions that he won't be a savior but he'll help somebody if they're his friend; that warmed my heart so much, and definately explained why harry is so irritable in your story. Thanks for making my heart melt.

I liked this concept, but Harry was a little shit in this. I like canon Harry well enough, but in this, I just wanted to punch him in his smug little magic-is-so-superior face. That being said, this was a very enjoyable read, and extra kudos to you if you meant for Harry to come off that way.

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I wish it had more..

I wish there was a bigger story here, it's interesting

good story

look, i dont think your a bad writer but alex rider's not helpless, and i think that your apparent favortism for harry has gotten in you way when you wrote this.
also jk rowling created ginny with a "girl power" and independance type of personallity, your ginny is well ooc in my opinion, sure ginny had a crush and idolized harry, but she was still down to earth about it.( not so much in the 2-3 books but she matures)
i'd also like to say that your not a bad writer of any thing along those lines but that you should probably just write HP alone, or stop writing crossovers where its harry and a down graded other , in this case it was alex rider.
this by the look of it on the discription looked like a good story, and i do like parts of it, but remember my advice. this critec is'nt ment to be harsh and demanding and tell you what to do, its just advice and wether you follow it idk, but i wrote this to improve your writing

Your Harry love has clouded your mind! Please scale it back next time, if you do forray into Alex Rider again. Alex is a spy who goes on dangerous missions, he is capable, smart, and quickwitted. The story was 'okay' but could've become better if you'd written him (Alex) the way he deserves... neat concept through