Loved this story. Thank you for sharing!

Thank you for sharing your story. It has been hard to read at times but great nonetheless. Thank you.

This has been a terrific story! Very creative and thought-provoking.

It's very, very surprising that Bella just trusts Jasper like that. It's like Joham's attitude permanently scarred her. She can't raise her voice or grow out of her meek attitude, her initial reaction to Jasper's "friends" notwithstanding. Everybody keeps saying they want the best for her, but they keep making decisions and execute them without even telling her, and she just goes along with it.

Urgh, Edward is such a brat that I can barely stand to read it. Still better than Jasper though, who is quite nasty without proper buildup.

The plot is really interesting, but the conversations are equally frustrating, if not more. Bella hardly ever speaks when she really needs to. Edward is unusually good at calming her down when she should be more alert. (His terrible act was also OOC from what we know of him in canon, but that can be chalşked up to this story being AU.) Jasper has a confidence that is not helping her at all. I'm also wondering why Alice let Peter and Char meet Bella at all. Considering her capabilities, not being able to Peter's horrible attitude is just a plot device without much sense.

I really want to like this story. And I do, to some extent, however, I can't help but think some things could've been fleshed out (or edited out altogether). Not that it matters much, I suppose, since the story is already completed and I have two thirds to read.

I didn't like the first chapters but It was worth because all the story was amazing. I loved Alexander and Edward as allways.

Thanks for your time
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LQUEZ

Wowowow. I read the first chapter a long time ago and said nope no more thanks. Then came across it again and tried again. Very glad to have the warning that the first six chapters are the heaviest because I was able to skim around stuff, since I knew it would end. The rest of the story blew me away. So many details, such great use of characters. I loved the oracle bit. And the way Alexander kept having to think about stuff. So so so worth reading, so glad I tried it again. Thanks for sharing!

I have to admit I almost didnt read this story because I read some of the reviews beforehand and a lot of them were negative. I decided to give you the benefit of the doubt though and read anyway, and I am so glad I did. This was a fantastic story. As others have said the beginning is rough but the entirety of the story at whole is quite genius. Your plotlines and characters were so completely unique but at the same time very canon and it was a beautiful blend to experience. So if anyone else doesnt want to read this story based on some of the reviews or even the first 6 chapters as well, I implore you to give it a chance because it really is worth it. Thank you so much for sharing this unique story. I've had a hard time tearing my eyes away from it, I was so entranced. You definitely have a gift for storytelling, I hope you continue to write in the future.

A very good read indeed. I love how it was different than everything else I've read here.
A horrible start, but a very nice ending. I just didn't like the fact that Bella didn't matter much, I also love this fic for the same reason.

Oh Bella. You stupid, stupid girl. Tsk.

Alexander was ever so fond of dragons...I’m glad he found his forever one! Joham...ewww! But Kyra and the synthetic blood..very cool! Loved Alexander...and Bella and the shifters. A very exciting and enjoyable read. Thank you for writing.

well... this story had something good going for it and now it's just ridiculous. WTF?

And Edward is wonderful to give Bella the time she needs.

I really love Carlisle’s inner struggle with justice and morality in this fic!