I'm here still hoping that you'll update this :'D I know it's a bit selfish to hope so because you do have a life of your own and everything, but still I have a little spark of hope for your stories (I love your Lightning x OC stories, can't stop reading them!).
I hope you'll see this and maybe give a respond for this what may be a negative, but hey a girl can hope? *chuckles*
I love your stories becaause of the story telling, it's so smooth to read and it doesn't jump one thing to another so quickly! It's easy to be on road with it and and and! There's so much of things going in my head, but I can't voice them, you know? There's much questions like is this the ending of your story dark and sad or did your life just get busy and you didn't just have any time to write anymore fanfictions?

Well whatever may the answer be I'll be here waiting for the update even if it doesn't ever come :) I hope you'll have a nice day!

Is that a cliff hanger?...or are you just leaving us there to make out our own ending?But I'm gonna be honest with ya, when Lia got hit I thought she might of died because she was already bruised and beaten. It just seems like a dark way to end a good story...then again that could've been your intent

I need to know what happens next! D; hope the next chapter is released soon.

This is good. I hope you will continue the story. can't wait for update.

Holyyyy shiiiit...

When I started reading this I thought this would be some sort of general drama relationship but this was totally unexpected. The feels from this story are too much.

This shouldn't need to be said but I'm seriously looking forward to the next chapter.

Well, well, soldier...

So, you're back at it again, eh?

This was really interesting, if not a bit frustrating, and by that, I mean the ending. Cliffhangers. Goddamn it! I HATE cliffhangers! Especially when a character I love gets bashed, hard. X_X (Flips a table)

So, as to the more relaxed and interesting part of this chapter: Lia's talk with Serah after Lightning took her out in her rage. That was really, really interesting, yes.

So, Lia has managed to make Serah understand and remember her, thanks to that memento and that quote. *W* That was pretty damn cute, yes. :3

Now, I wonder how Lia and Lightning are gonna survive this...(Sigh)

Good work!
Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

Aah what are you doing to my heart? I feel sad for reading yet happy at an amazing chapter.

Omg at last :D poor lia :'( damn you are the master of cliffhanger ! Hehehe seriously cant wait for the next

Aahhnn I'm crying my heart out!This is just so sad!nmhhg please update when you can.

OMG How and why? update the next chapter its getting good

Lia is so going to get beaten up :o

What about the bastard that did that to lia?!
And how can she simply confess that she killed them? How wrecked is her mind now? Gaaaah but it was sweet that lightning hugged her...
About your cliffhanger, you're a sadist you know that? It kills! Dx
Sincerely, Rei!

Woah lia tell the truth and she get punch on the face poor lia so lightning trust lia and now i think she hates her anyway you spelled my nama wrong XD its okay i dont mind dont worry :) thanks for the update i really appreciate it *thumbs up* waiting for the next chappy

You always end at the wrong spots. lol update when you can

Well, well, soldier...

Hoo-rrah! 1 review, btches!

Now, really? Later chapters are gonna be even darker? o.O Goddamn it. Can you make them optional, at least? Like, they only need to be read if the reader is a sick basterd? DX

With THAT out of the way...

Lia has come back to sanity...for the time being. And then, the great revelation for the Farron Sisters: Lia killed their parents. And Lightning must be seeing red right about now. Oh God. This is NOT gonna be pretty.

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

You do know that I hate you for this cliffhanger right?
Omg did you have to make it that khkskqbdjv? XD i held my breath too long this chapter xD
it certainly shocked me xD
and i wonder if she would ever tell her story... Or even how she cpuld do that._.
How did ahe go back to human and attend school? Ugh update pleaaaaasseeee? D:
Sincerely, an old friend, Rei.