Grammar went to hell, what happened?

Also that turning of the MC's lil sis into a harem member just feels wrong. They did my boy wrong.

seems fun

not harem end? that sucks

Chifuya?

I want more updates plss upload soon

i am in the middle of re-reading this story but please update. T.T

I don't like the fact that saito doesn't have a pair of balls...

Dude get the chapters right. Next chapter

Hope this is continued

I really like your stories because they all have interest plots and the transition of even is smooth, it not too rush but also not too dragout either.
Still this is my favorite story out of all your stories, even more than familier of devil so i hope you can some how find your mojo back to update this gem :D. It a great read

This is good so far please update soon!

Wow, I really have to say that your spellings and characters are all over the place. So messy.

Dude, not to be rude or anything, but please get a beta-reader. Now I know I don't have the right to say this because I'm still at the fourth chapter and there are 17 chapters and maybe you have a beta-reader now or maybe your grammer has improved and all. If so the. I honestly request that you re-write (type) the earlier chapters but if you don't want to, the. don't do it. But if not then I really do recommend that you need a beta-reader. Thank you for reading my (maybe?) rant.

ohh... trouble brewing from Halkegnia... a new void mage? or some new evil boss XD

Anyway, thanks for the update, keep up the good work, and hope you update soon.

Urfjjsnejkfkemka!
This is definitely a diamond in the rough!