*picks feelings up off the floor*

*applauds you*

It's well written, and it's nice how they really are both broken. I like Sirius' comment that they could fix each other. What I don't like is how the story seems to have very little bit of a plot, it feels like it needs another chapter to resolve itself or something. I dunno, it just feels vaugly incomplete. I like the begining, how Sirius brings it all up and everything, I like the setting for the confession. I don't like how Remus reacts, it just doesn't seem like the kind of reaction his character would have. Maybe the denying it, crying, avoidance, and stuff, but the running away just doesn't seem to fit with his character. I do like how Samantha was developed into a real character, and not just a faceless girl that Sirius breaks up with. I have mixed-feelings about this story.

Yeah... why IS he behaving like a 12 year old girl? Classic puppy love story, give it a twist, will ya'? Other than that, quite pleasing! (: