Wow...there are no words to describe how awesome this story is! One of the best ones describing their relationship over the years! Though a bit long for a one chapter fic, it was awesome! I just couldn't stop reading it!

Great story, please write a sequel.

OMG! This is one of the greatest (if not the absolute best!) Lily/James fanfiction I have ever read!

You managed to take a story that has been told over and over (and over and over) again, and make it into something truly original, and absolutely amazing!

Cheers!

Noideagirl

.God. this story was phenominal! I adored it, I couldn't even put it down! The way you write is fantastic, you should seriously consider writing for a living, if you wrote a book like this I'd be sure to read it! Good luck with your future stories,

best of wishes,

~FRG

This story is incredibly fantastic! If you really write a sequel I would love to read it. Amazing job!

Holy frickin' crap. That was awesome, amazing, fantastic, super, epic, marvellous, magnificent, supermegafoxyawesomehot, and any other synonym of mind-blowing.

Props, my friend.

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