I agree with you for the need for more KDs, but a technicality -Dom's not a knight.

a very good story i loved this chapter i cant wait till the next one comes out i do hope that it is soon

watde9

and there's no SEQUEL?

I really like the story but you shouldn't have ended it this way! Now I don't know if she makes it or not!

AIGH! That's not done! -Funny accent- Jou fool! What on God's green Earth are you thinking, cutting the story off there? *Continues to yell at you for being a total idiot, and ending the story so suddenly* *Growls* 'K, I'm good. Oh, All your comments about being mentally unstable? I'm even more insane! ;) Haha! Love the story, apart from the ending.

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Young green-eyed healers! Yay! We love Neal, even when we want to hit him over the head with something, preferably something hard. Am I right?

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oh my god i'm listening to 'kiss from a rose right! now that is so weird

come on please tell what happens to her,you cant leave that as a clift hanger,,please dont...

I know that your fanfic was posted a long time ago but here is some info:

1.) Domitan isn't a knight he's just part of the Own

2.) If Kel rides with Dom then he would be under Kel'd command not the other way around.

i hope that isnt the end? please do 1 more chapter

hi plz write more !you got to finish it and say wat happens to kel!plz

this story was very good except you used an abbreviation somewhere... i forget where. WHAT HAPPENS? DID LORD RAOUL SAVE HER?

This was a wonderful story! Great job!

this had better not be complete if so you better have a sequal. grr.

jen

nice. i am so excited to see what happens. dom had better not die. if he does you do. hehe

jen