Great story. The action and dram were well done. All the characters had nice introductions and were well incorporated into the story. The heroes must now deal with some heavy losses and the tension thickens.

Damn talk about a downer! Gwen is dead, Mary Jane locked up, Peter took off to join the X-Men for a while, and worst of all Frogman survived his ordeal. (lol) You sure like ending things on a bad note don't you Shadowsnake? My only question is why doesn't Mary Jane bust out of jail and track down the one who framed her? Beats sitting in a cell doing nothing. She needs to be proactive not reactive here. Hopefully you change this soon. This is not like her to just take this outrage. Update soon! XD

Oh why did you have to kill of Gwen! It seems like in almost every story Gwen plays a part in she dies! What is up with that! Not happy here! :(

Yeah I would say Gwen is pissed off! She is not gonna let Spider-Man, Firestar, and Scarlet Spider stand in her way. She will take them all down! Things are getting excited now! Keep it up! :D

Good chapter! Yes! Gwen is putting her foot down and taking action! No one will stop her now! XD

Alright Gwen you go girl! Track down that monster and bastard and break every bone in his body! He deserves to pay! Let no one stop you! I am rooting for you! :-)

Great chapter! Well looks like Frogman bought the bullet. Wasn't very smart to put down the big boss like that. (lol) As for Gwen damn she is on a mission now and not even Spider-Man and his friends will stop her especially if she some how gets ahold of that venom suit from Sally. Should fun to watch though. Update soon! XD

Great chapter! Gwen is on the warpath now! If Hobgoblin is smart he will get out of town fast! Gwen is coming for him and she taking no prisoners! If Spider-Man gets in her way, I imagine she will take him down to. I bet she has studied his strengths and weaknesses and will be prepared when Peter tries to stop her. She is a genius and brilliant with tactics having learned from the very best her own father. That makes her a dangerous opponent! Peter will soon realize this as will the rest of his friends! Update soon! :D

Oh I hope Gwen goes after that scumbag! She deserved justice!

Good chapter! I kinda wish you'll dump the mini-clones and just focus on Peter, Gwen, Mary Jane, Liz, and Prowler. Frogman is tolerable to an extent but the dynamic between the 5 teenagers mentioned is where the story shines. :D

Awesome chapter! Shadowsnake let Gwen pursue her revenge against Hobgoblin. That would be a nice twist! Gwen has the smarts to come up with something to help her whether it's taking a serum to give her superpowers or building a contraption like say the Shocker to wear allowing her to be on a more even playing field with Hobgoblin. There hasn't really been a story like this where one of the lesser characters seeks revenge and not Spider-Man. Please consider it! Thanks! :D

Gwen is gonna be furious now! She will want vengeance against Hobgoblin. I wonder if Spider-Man will help her or stand in her way.

She shouldn't blame Peter for the death of her father. He did all he could to save him. That is just her grief talking. She will realize this in time. I think Peter should sit down with Gwen and tell her how he became Spider-Man and what happened the night of his uncle's death and the terrible burden he placed on himself because of it. Like Gwen he carries a lot of guilt over something that wasn't really his fault. Though in this Gwen seems to be blaming him instead of herself. Captain Stacy was a police officer. He knew the risks. It comes with the job. He have gave his life heroically in the line of duty and Gwen should honor that.

Keep up the good work! :D

Great chapter! Gwen lost her father and nows knows Peter's secret! Talk about information overload! I wonder what she will do in revenge against Hobgoblin? Gwen is not gonna let this go that is for sure. Mary Jane has a new power! That's cool. I hope you explain more about this transformation she can do next chapter and what benefits she gets from it. Update soon! :-)

Nice chapter. Update soon.

Good chapter! A little confusing trying to keep track of all the characters though. :D