| Reviews for Always One Step Ahead |
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Guest chapter 10 . 6/20/2019 Ok, so... I know this was written years ago, but I love this story! It kept me intrigued all the way through! It seemed like a book to me! The writing flowed very well! I honestly forgot this was a fan fiction, i was like, ok I’m reading a very good book right now. Anyway, I just wanted you to know that I really enjoyed this book/fanfic and that you did an amazing job writing it! |
Guest chapter 10 . 2/28/2019 Loved it man! |
M chapter 10 . 3/18/2017 Man, your story... is amazing #thumb up |
ArkieR chapter 10 . 8/15/2015 This is by far the best secret-agent-type fic that I've read. Bookmarking for future re-reading! |
chibi-unicorn-girl chapter 10 . 8/24/2013 Flippin awesome! Loved it! |
Colquii chapter 10 . 3/23/2013 I loved this story! I liked the idea of secret agent and how arthur can read minds through physical contact, an original idea. I wonder what happens to Francis... :) |
Mirimo27 chapter 10 . 3/11/2013 Wow, gotta say that this whole story was great. Everyone's character role in here was perfect, and I loved how all their roles were revelant to story plot as well. The action part of your written chaps were amazing. I especially loved how you roled Francis, since not all USUK storie with Francis in it is done justice most of the time. It shows another side on the Frenchmen, other than the usual steroetypical "perf" of himself. xD Made myself a much better headcanon of him too, lol. I also really loved the idea of the Lovino being the Mafia boss, and how the Bad Touch Trio had a chance to meet/talk to each other in some of the chaps. I just wished Francis could have gotten a chance to maybe talk to Antonio, but oh well. I was also curious of who Eliza wanted to extract out, and where Gilbert went...maybe probably another thing I wished you elaborted on, but other than that, the story was very satisfying to read throughtout the whole way. This is actually my first time reading a agent AU for USUK, but I don't regret it in the slightest after reading this. Overall, this story is very well-written, and I'm glad that it was fairly entertaining to read, too. Great job on this-! x] |
Wolfie Red chapter 10 . 3/6/2013 Oh my gosh I love this story. I loved (and sincerely hated) the cliffhangers and you did a great job handling the action and drama. Lovi is adorable as always. I love they way you built Alfred's character also, as I think of him as goofy on the outside and calculating on the inside. I like the whole brotherly conflict also. I have a few friends reading this also so you should get a few more reviews soon! :) Love, EarlyWriter |
PurrrpleLovah29 chapter 10 . 2/2/2013 I Love it! |
Shadowdemon321 chapter 10 . 1/19/2013 Wow...just...wow. I loved the entire storyline, and it was very well written. (I also very much appreciated sexy Mafia Lovino .). |
Guest chapter 10 . 1/15/2013 ...*flails in seat* That was a good story, well-written. :D I like your writing style; you don't use overly flowery words or convoluted sentence structure. Your work is easy to read and understand. I love it! Also, you write Arthur and Alfred so...in-character. Personally, I find that hard, so the fact that you can do it makes me jealous. Jealous because I ship USUK and can't write for them...jealous. I'll shut up about that now. I definitely look forward to more of your work! :D |
Whimsical Storyteller chapter 10 . 1/14/2013 Dude, you were a step ahead of the freaking government. Feel badass yet, Arthur? XD This story was awesome, by the way. |
Whimsical Storyteller chapter 9 . 1/14/2013 D: my emotions and sdfghjkl what's gonna happen? o.o |
Whimsical Storyteller chapter 8 . 1/14/2013 This is badass X3 You're awesome at writing mission...scene things |
Whimsical Storyteller chapter 7 . 1/14/2013 Dun dun dun What shall happen next? This story is exciting o.o I feel like I'm on a mission :3 |