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Ah well. I suppose they can improve in time but they really are realistic characters. It's a lot different going from turtle to humanoid turtle than it is going from human to turtleish. The guys were raised more strictly too.

Leo found her? Just him to witness and introduce himself before the chaos of his brothers? Did you get my Christmas list or something? Yaaay! Love that you had him carrying weapons beside his katana. You don't see them use much besides their signature weaponry... now someone needs to slap Mikey. _

A review. Ok, hmm... YESSS! HAHAHAAAAA! So hard to find! Nearly impossible! And complete too! Wheee! Turtle girls! YAYYY!
THANK YOU!

So this is it? As in, the end, no more, fat lady has sung? Because while I understand you not wanting this to go on forever and ever, this story has so much more potential and it feels unfinished.

Great job on the story so far, I liked it alot, please keep going and update real, real, real, soon thanks.

i'm gonna say . . . raph. yes the femme raph.

And here's the female leo!

Gah! Please! Update! I can't believe this fic is three years old!

Please update this story soon!

Ah, I've got it more now. Will their shells get bigger?

Anyway, me no likey Bliss.

Sorry, I'm pretty much traditional about stuff like that. Meh, and I like the boys so I don't like watching them being played although it's semi-realistic.

Next chapter.

The only thing that's been kind of bothering me is the clothing.

If they're like Donatello and the others how do they get clothes that fit?

Do they wear them over their shells? That'd be kind of odd.

Do they just look like girls with green skin?

It's confusing and I think it would help if it were explained more. You said they have some human characteristics(like clevage apparently) but it contrasts with what readers might picture female turtles to look like.

Still reading though.

I'd also recommend detracting a little from the constant sex stuff. I mean, I understand that the boys will be horny but they could be interested in other things about the girls.

Oh, and I'd recommend no little smiley faces in the middle of the story since it can kind of take away from the writing.

"PLEASE review. even if it's to say something inane, like 'fart', or 'boobie'. I would greatly appreciate it. Thanks."

Review: Fart.

*snicker* Okay, so I couldn't resist, being the idiotic person I am. But do not fret I shall actually review!...In a serious manner...okay, semi-serious...alright, so it mostly matters on my mood but it will be a review!(Unlike the mumbling so far)

Actual Review(done as I'm reading):

Oh I like it. Sorry, I would've worked to point things out seperately that I liked and disliked but I didn't have any suggestions. And if I were to copy what I liked this review would be filled with excerpts of your writing.

This is a new twist to the story and it's really interesting to read. Granted, you've probably gotten that from everyone and this review doesn't matter but it's true. I like that you have others having to adapt and deal with a mutation and the new way they have to face life. It'll be really interesting to read the rest.

I'm going to read the others and hopefully write some reviews that will be more useful than this one.

-shyshi

now that's a cliffhanger!long time since you've added to your work on this site, so i'm uncertain as to whether or not you'll ever get to this note. however, would like to tell you how much i appreciated this story and all the others you've written command of mood is excellent, your characterizations are first-rate and you have my highest approval of some of your word choices. only possible criticism(negative) is that i see a few places where you have heard a word and thought you knew how to spell it without looking it up in a real dictionary to see how crazy our bastard English language is as she is writ! must add one final kudo-especially relished the story titled: Park Night, mood/atmosphere created there was chilling, exciting, shiver making and you got D. spot-on! can only hope you find time and energy enough to finish "The Lost Girls" !

sasami? ... all that with the foot clan and suddenly Raph's being shot by the girl's contact? what? why? the foot DO have something to do with the girls' disappearance, right? you're not gonna leave this with raph dead in the back alleys? we get to SEE some kind of romance, right?

Mike and bliss fooled around and you didnt' show us ANY of it! and ... i don't really LIKE the girls. are they supposed to be bad people? Is that the lesson here? Even MUTATED humans don't jive with Turtle life? Mike thinking he'd rather be without them... Raph hating them... Don loosing his wall... Leo going slowly insane trying to get them to fricking understand?

If so? Congrats on breaking the cliche. You get applause for that. 4 turtle girls who DON'T end up with the TMNT. original. And clever. Had you been planning that from the start?