Still love it and anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

Wow i love how you can describe the battle so well. Its seriously a good story so far. keep up the good work!

I honestly can't wait until you update again! I wanted to marry Brynjolf as well but was disappointed when I ended up having to marry Farkas instead. I mean, he was ok-ish at looks and was a companion so he had fighting skills but that was it. Please update as soon as possible :D you're a really good writer.

This is extremely good! i can't wait for you to update

Awesome story so far! I'm really looking forward to seeing the next chapter.

Interesting story so far! Nicely written and the descriptions are really great, too! I can't wait to read what happens next, so keep up the fabulous work & please continue immediately, a.s.a.p.! Take care and have a Happy Easter! _

I'm loving this already! The description and personality in your work is great, it makes me want to read on and find out who exactly your charater is. Also, great that you've skipped the usual intro/ first chapter of Helgen, it's good to see some variety.

And Brynjolf, Brynjolf is always good. Can't wait till he appears. :)