I swear I'm gonna die if you don't update this soon!

WHAT IN THE NAME OF... OKAY. WHAT? WHY ISN'T THERE MORE OF THIS? I don't get it. This is awesome. There should be more. WHY NO MORE? FIX IT! FIX JEFF, THIS IS SO GOOD!

Freaking oh my gosh...

First, this is perfect, and I feel an intense desire to watch Finding Nemo because of it... but I assume that's what everyone says because... yeah. Finding Nemo is the best ever. Actually, that's a lie. Jeff is to Nemo as I am to How To Train Your Dragon. I have seen that movie 59 times at this point, and when I play the soundtrack, I can quote the words to the movie along with it...

Because I'm insane.

Anyway.

I'm sort of dying over you naming the twins Ethan and Evan. I have two friends who are actually in the most total bromance ever named Ethan and Evan, so that's like... hilarious. Ugh, my babies... One seems sad lately, and I don't like it... the other and I are finally on like... friends terms. I just kinda knew him before, but now I do know him.

jda;lkdsjfa;slkdfj;alskdfjals;kdfj AND THIS ANGST? IT MAKES MY HEART PHYSICALLY HURT! Great job, this is ridiculously awesome. I have homework, but you make me not care!

Please update soon! I really love this story and I keep rereading it, Niff are SO CUTE! Please update I miss this story and I need something to read with my phone in my pencil case in science class, please! I needs my Niff thank you!

Please please please PLEASE! Write more this fic is awesome

i just read all the chapters and omg! it's so good! :D

First all the fluff and then all the angst. I love it. Can't wait for more :D

Yay! Niff angst. I feel kinda bad that I thrive off their pain though.

No! God, fuck! why ? oh my god no how could you even do that. I SOBBED SO HARD oh my good I need to read all the fluff now o.O

Okay, let me just say this, I LOVE THIS STORY! Thank you. Good day.

Aaaahhhhh! This entire story is AMAZING! And so beautiful! I hope you continue it; I can't wait to read more. I was also wondering if you were gonna go into more detail about Jeff and Nick's pasts, particularly Jeff's :) Thank you so much for writing this

Poor Jeff. I just want to cuddle him to death and tell him everything is gonna be okay :(

Your writing is really good. You've created such a tense atmosphere, and yet you so lovingly portray Niff's care and tendereness with each other. You keep a sense of reality with each character but then you maxamize on each one so beautifully. I'm also hoping that we will hear more of what Jeff went through. Getting bits and pieces as painful as they are makes me want to hear a more detailed account. And I feel like I want Nick to know what he went through so he can really understand why Jeff is so broken and damaged. I guess I need things to come together as a whole for my own satisfaction. This is perfect for me and I can't wait to settle in with it and just enjoy the story. I hope you keep going with this and give me something to look forward to :)

- Underdog247

Loved it :D

OH my lord! This is great stuff! And I love how you update so quickly! This last chapter made my heart go all tight and yeah, u love this story!

But.. but... :c

POOR JEFFIE! D: