H ha ha. You get brothers!

LOL I've got to know what happend to Scott the first time! And why does that girl hate Virgil that much?

What a great read. Thank god for misspent youth.

Awesomely fun story ! Want more of this stuff from ya ! ;)

Haha! I have to say, this sort of story ain't my cup of tea (strippers and all), but this was pretty good! It was a good wake up call when I laughed, as I've had a long day at my course. Now ... On to the sequel ...

love it sounds like somthing they would do and john being the good one lol read mine if you like x

ok now that was dead funny as i really enjoyed it and it cheered me up just after coming out of hospital nice job lol xx

Poor chaps! Very amusing nice work :)

All right! All right! (raises hands in submission)...I'll write a sequel/prequel to this! Now I gotta figure that out and ask DH for more material...He's still offering to do primary research and I'm still thanking him but saying a firm 'no'...

Alright this story is amazing! I love Scott as a sexy playboy, too many people write him as super sensible and responsible big brother type but I think he's much more of a player than that! They're men for goodness sake, just because they spend their lives saving people and helping the world doesn't mean they don't like a bit of fun like any other man now and then!

But now I NEED to know what happened last time Scott went to the club to get that reputation and to have all of the girls being that excited about him coming back again, and the fact that every girl who comes over to the boys greets Scott with a full on kiss! I'm picturing some sort of mass orgy type thing that somehow turned into a huge fight! And also I'd love to know the back story of Virgil and Francie, what happened there?

Well done, John for really making them feel inferior. I can imagine him just standing there looking all neat and sophisticated with one eyebrow raised, then tutting and shaking his head.

This story SCREAMS at the top of its lungs for a sequel, or prequel! If this story is what comes from encouragement then you should definitely write more, everyone is encouraging you now!

LiGi xx

Okay, this was not the best thing to read during the interlude before a two hour maths lecture.

Not because it wasn't good, because it was fantastic (I was howling away in the library, again, not the best place, but it was all I had), but because instead of concentrating on vectors and scalars, all I could think about was the Tracys coated in oil in a kid sized swimming pool. Do you know how distracting that is? You probably do.

I loved all the little details - Scott making the front page of the Enquirer sometime in his past, Virgil's ex and the secret Virg has and then John rocking up to bail them out of their holding cell. I'm loving the fact that John seems to know what Scott did the last time he went to Centrefolds.

Like others have mentioned, this screams for a sequel/prequel. It really does. If this is what you produce with encouragement, I will happily be a one-girl cheering squad for you.

Great work as usual. :)

Awww, shame. I feel sorry for the boys.

Monday morning. The start of the week. Things to do, things I should have already done. Thank Goodness for a story about oily naked people that allows me to procrastinate even more!

Trust the Fish to be the first to want to go to a strip club. Centerfolds! Sounds like a classy joint. And Virgil, with his face squashed up in the monitor. "Can we? Can we? Can we?"

Scott has a girlfriend on the mainland? I'm surprised. (That he's only got ONE girlfriend on the mainland! I'd expect him to have one in every country they've ever been to!)

I hope they've parked TBs 1 and 2 somewhere safe, that's all I'm sayin'. If the Hood knew they were off to a strip club to drink beers he'd be all over their technology like a rash, trying to disable the Automatic Camera Detectorrrrr :)

I love how all the girls remember Scott. Whatever he did in the past, it was obviously memorable enough to have stuck with them. It's even funnier when you think how Scott was all, "Remember, behave yourselves, guys!" to his brothers.

"Aw, c'mon, I paid for the damage…and none of the girls had any complaints…" - Y'know, part of me wants to kick Scott's ass for being a rich playboy, thinking all you need to do is throw money at a problem. But at the same time...hell, it's Scott Tracy, the hottest man in the universe!

'Mandy said I should make sure you don't feel lonely, Scott. I've heard a lot about you. The back room still has your marks on the walls."- Nice! Beginning to sound more and more like an old-fashioned saloon brawl went on!

"No touching the lady in her bikini area or our referees will intervene!" - Ah-haa. THAT must have been what happened the last time Scott was there. Case closed!

A thousand dollars to wrestle with oily women in a children's play pool. A thousand dollars! That could buy one-eighth of a child's heart monitor! That could pay for some orphans to have a day out at DisneyWorld! Who does Virgil think he is, Prince Harry? :D

Your description of Virgil. 'Although a stocky man, he was as muscular as his brothers. He didn't bother working out to gain definition, but looked for strength since it would be most useful in his job. Without an ounce of fat, he moved confidently toward the pit.'

Ay carumba. I think those two ladies are going to need reinforcements.

OMG- Virgil's ex-girlfriend is a stripper. Why am I not surprised? These guys sure had some shady pasts!

You know what- I once had an idea for a story where a Brothel caught fire and when the guys went to rescue the girls, one of them recognised Scott. I never wrote it. It wasn't going to be a comedy, but I can imagine now, that if this Strip Joint was on fire, all of these girls would have to be paid to keep quiet!

'John Tracy eyed each of them with a fine expression of irony. He was neatly dressed with a crisply ironed polo shirt, khaki slacks and boat shoes.'- OMG, as if things weren't bad enough for the guys, Mr. Cool, Calm and Collected arrives to bail them out of jail. I love it. They're all still oily and dishevelled and he needs rubber gloves to get a hold of them!

The story ends as though it's going to be a multi-chapter. Is there going to be a part two? Knowing you, you won't be able to resist the cries for "More!" So, c'mon, Xen, if all it takes is a dare, then I dare you to bump the rating up to M and really go for it ;p

Brilliant! You have so got to write a prequel (or two!) for this!

great story would love to have a story bout Scott's first time there you got me intrigued