I'm glad I'm not the only one who really noticed Yoa in BG&E. in the game she's obviously hard to find much out about (Like any of the kids really) but her appearance is confusing, the species scanner says she's human and no one else looks anything like her. I think this was a really clever take on her, though part of the story throws me off. when she's looking into Jade's eyes the first time, was she something like a telepath? or something the domz actually did through jade?

After that though, when Jade took her back to the lighthouse was really sweet and really telling how Jade handled being able to take everyone in, and really made the fic for me.