These are too short

Oh no, have you abandoned this story? I am really looking forward to the confrontation between Harry and his parents.

I doubt you’re coming back to this, but one can only hope.

You know, I never understood why they would put the answers to the problems in front of them. For eg. why would they put the key before the door that was locked? It’s literally the most stupid thing ever. Why wouldn’t Sprout use a more deadly plant? Why would Snape put the potion that lets you through on the table, instead of filling them all with poison? Though I can understand Rowling needed them to get through for plot purposes, it is a glaring plot hole, to me anyways.

Other than that, I think you’re doing really well, and I think this will be a great book when you complete it!

I’m not a big fan of the name Kieran or Harry Hades (together, not as separate names), but I found everything else lovely and wonderful. Good luck with the rest of the story. I think Hadrian Hades has a much better ring to it than Harry Hades, if you know what I mean, especially for the Dark Lord’s Heir. I guess Kieran Slytherin doesn’t sound too bad, but I haven’t grown on it yet.

It's was a good start. Kind of boring now I personally don't care for Seth. Harry made a vow to now care for another why did he brake it to fast and easily. Why are they 9? Co-ed dorms? Sorry I just can't bring myself to read the rest for it.

they start school at 11 not 9 in Britain.

was anyone else waiting for harry to use his shadow form to search for the diary as it would have been much easier?

Oh. No. Please update soon!
I, um, notice it's been a long time since you last, well, published. He. He. This fanfiction is fantastic and funny, and I hope you add more for everyone to read.

7 years of bad luck you bring to the Riddle name Harry! 7 years of bad luck! (plays Superstition on Voldermorts phonograph)

Turned the door knob? Sorry but in England all the doors have handles. not sure why. I guess it's a culture thing.

Why here in America the Dark Lord would not get that far. We Americans have something called security alarms or sometimes home systems with CCTV and all. I've seen a few on Police Interceptors for Britain including a drug dealer that had a booby trapped house. If the Dark Lord decided to continue past that a lot of us have guns and by guns I mean pistols or handguns. The Dark Lord would've had a bullet to his head by the time he uttered the first syllable to the dark curse.

You Liberals would be wetting your pants meanwhile and praying for the government to save you.

Plz update sn

I was wondering if u will do any romance with harry later on in the story if would it be malexmale?

Plz Update soon