Reviews for Passion Unchosen
DorkyRogers chapter 4 . 5/29/2012
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Sideslip chapter 4 . 3/22/2012
A happy ending! I enjoyed this. Glad that everyyhing worked out in the end. Prowl is quite the gem.
Sideslip chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
This is certainly a different take on Prowl and Jazz's relationship. It is a terrible thing that war has done to make something good into something painful and feared. It does make sense with SpecOps that doesn't make it less sad. However, Jazz certainly has a good friend even if it seems like all of this is ultimately setting up Prowl for bad times ahead.
Emi chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
I loved loved LOVED this work of fanfiction. You painted a real and raw portrait of Jazz and Prowl. And the angsty smut...my oh my. I can't even put into words how much I enjoyed reading this.

Please please deliver more of these fics! You are continously a writing genius.
Pjlover666 chapter 4 . 3/11/2012
Beautiful. The interfacing was hot like always but the bonding... I'm so happy for them! The war over and now the two of them are together forever in a peaceful world! Everything they've been fighting for, it's all been worth it! Such a fitting end! Loved the entire story! _

~MW
Pjlover666 chapter 3 . 3/11/2012
Hah, Prowl has to wait out until Jazz settles down. But I'm not worried - Prowl is nothing but patient :) And Blue is carrying! That's so sweet! I'm so happy for Blue and the twins. The end of the chapter, with Prowl 'reclaiming' Jazz was wonderful! Loved it. ) Awww, just one more chapter...
Pjlover666 chapter 2 . 3/11/2012
I got little worried here. Poor Jazz. But, in a way deleting a large portion of his memories is Jazz still the same? Ina way that good(I think) since he wont be bothered by the darker aspects of the war and what he used to be). I hope everything is for the best. I'm so happy he enjoys interfacing now, like he should be!

again, another amazingly hot chapter :D Btw, I saw in DA the Praxian Jazz pic you commissioned - it's epic! It's so Jazz. It really suits him
Pjlover666 chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
This first chapter was amazing! I swear, you write the best Prowl/Jazz smut there is! Every time I get an alert from you I pray it's some p/j story and I squee'd so hard when it turned out to be one!

A very interesting perspective on their interface protocols. Prowl of course was such a gentlemech, loved it. It was so hot and sweet at the same time! Thing I like most about your style is equality between the characters (for instance Jazz isn't always spiking Prowl and vise versa) You always trigger ALL of my kinks regarding this paring. Wonderful work

This was one hot and amazing chapter! *fans self*

~MW
Yami-Yugi3 chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
I've notice there was some repeating the same scene twice in this chapter
Moonlight black rose chapter 4 . 3/10/2012
awww This was a beautiful Prowl/Jazz story! XD
SunnySidesofBlue chapter 4 . 3/10/2012
Awwww, this was wonderful!
renegadewriter8 chapter 4 . 3/10/2012
Wonderful! This was really well written and I just love how you write these two! It didn't hurt that it was incredibly HOT! A very interesting concept you added here, poor poor Jazz. Good thing he had a friend like Prowl. Though I am seriously curious to what the hell Mirage does that had Jazz so freaked out XD

Awesomeness!
Camfield chapter 4 . 3/10/2012
Super hot, super amazing. You take these characters and I don't want anything to happen to them as much as I want to watch how you resolve them.

Wonderful. :)
yamiishot chapter 4 . 3/10/2012
Awww this was wonderful. Really pulled at my heartstrings in places, it was just so perfect. Brilliant job, well done!
infinityinmirrors chapter 4 . 3/10/2012
Love this story nice to see Prowl in charge for once! Great dynamic as usual XD great work guys!