please update

Erika is the weakest gym leader in kanto and you making ash lost. I rather make him lost to surge or sabrina or even koga. His battle win is inconsistent. You need to make it more detailed than this author.

This ash is rather airhead than canon. Walking calmly when ship is sinking!?And then unconscius for three days!?Forced evolution!?Yeah right. He didn't even call his mother when journey. The fuck author, professor oak must be birthing you.

Wait! feeling pain, getting stronger, is Froakie replaced with Trapinch?!

When I think of ne ne I think of deddenne.

Eevee! because cute is justice!

I would love to see this continued! It’s one of the best Pokémon fanfics I’ve seen! Although, I do understand if you can’t/won’t continue it. All the best to you.

I see their muse never returned

This was a fantastic read well done

man..there is nothing more annoying than final chapter named author notes! such a shame for a really good fic

Fuck you, you abandoned it when you said you’re gonna rewrite it. Go fuck your self

I love the story. I hope you update soon. I don't mean to rush you or anything.

I love the chapter. That was great.

That was great. I love how you did it. I also like the way you change it up a pit.

Are you still updating this story? I heard this is really good and I really want to read it but I'm hesitant to read a story that might be dropped.