Just found this story- and I love it :D Update when you can, please! You're a great writer.

Brillaint story, has me looking forward to every word. Cant wait for the next chapter :3

This story is amazing! It is so well written, I couldn't put it down. I love how you changed the character between Narrator Zelda and Queen Zelda, as well as how Link is portrayed. I can't wait for the next update!

Yaaaaas! You're back! Please don't wait too long for the next chapter!

good at indepth reviews but it's important for someone to know how their work is being received so yeah, i really enjoyed this chapter :) I've literally binge read this over the span of 2 days. Update soon please!

I am so happy for this to be back again, but I assure you that it hasn't been a major wait! Malladus was always out there, of course, but I think that this interlude truly shows how dark he can be; a force to be reckoned with! Nonetheless, their plan really has to work if they have any chance of sorting this entire mess out. Malladus all ready knows about Link, even if the latter doesn't know that, so catching his attention will hopefully be easier than expected. The memory was truly haunting, but sweet at the same time, and the contemplation over "us" is something to really think about. I loved it! :3

This might be a short chapter, but I actually really enjoyed it! That intimate moment between Link and Zelda was absolutely perfect, to be honest. Good job with that! And I can't wait for the next chapter, of course :)

I'd like to say that this is definitely one of my favorite zelink stories. The characterization is spot-on and the language perfectly conveys the tone. I also think that the story itself is fresh and new. Zelink is the most common pairing among zelda fans, so it's not too easy to find a fanfic as unique as this one. As a bit of constructive criticism, I think that the pov could stay a little more constant. Can't wait for the next update!

This is really good! And the plot and concept is so unique and intriguing too! The only thing I'm confused about is the lack of the fourth light spirit unless Faron comes in later? Anyway I've enjoyed every chapter and can't wait to read more, keep up the awesome work!

You haven't exactly stated this, but is the amount of time link has remained on each time increasing, as well as his recent tendency to wake himself up?

That's amazing! I always love chapters with flashbacks being the centre-point because it gives the story depth and feel. And that wasn't overdone either, making me lovemit even more. It just looks into his character so much, which I adore, and it builds tne tension; especially since the next chapter will be around Malladud. I can't wait for him and Link to meet again! -

Ah I can't wait to read the next chapter! This is one solid well written story!

I just read chapters 19 and 20, and they were both fantastic! The story is moving along at a nice pace, which is pretty awesome. I know I've said this countless times, but I really do enjoy the flashbacks/dreams or whatever you want to call them. Also, that last moment when Link cut Zelda's hair was absolutely adorable! It was so perfect. But anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. Congratulations on your promotion by the way!

So many feels! I really am glad that you put the flashback into this, just because it gives his character so much depth that a lot of stories wouldn't want to explore in case it was "too much", but the route you too was both shocking and beautiful at the same time. The interludes were very sinister too, especially with the foreshadowing. I do hope that neither of them get their way, especially since Malladus has all ready taken so much from him!
Can't wait for more, but I understand life more than you ever know! I can hold the sweetness of this chapter close to my heart until then! :3

Guuuuuh I just read the whole thing in like two days and it's now five am...
That's my way of saying that this story is awesome and I'm so glad I read it because there is only one other story that had a crap ton written by the time I found it and read it in two days. That makes no sense to me reading it good night. Morning. Bloody hell happy Saturday after black Friday.