Reviews for Pick me up
Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2019
Wow what a story!when reading it in the first of the story who would have guessed it would turn out like it did?A very good story keep on writing stories Live Long and Prosper
Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2019
so cute
Cowshift chapter 1 . 10/9/2017
Was the drink line a WOW reference?
Izlandi chapter 1 . 7/6/2016
I can't stop laughing! Jims pick up lines were just too good hahahaha!
wotumba1 chapter 1 . 5/9/2016
LOL amazing, those lines are really working LOL
vulcanprodigy chapter 1 . 1/26/2016
At first I was a little iffy about this fic (mostly currently I'm hunting for a long, heart-wrenching one), but I just kept on reading and now I'm totally won over :P very cute, and I can definitely empathise with jimbo
Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2016
The second hand embarrassment and fitness overload has slain me!
tanseynz chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
Love seriously must overcome idiocy because if Jim had started that with anyone else, he'd have been slapped into the middle of next week. Hmmm, actually, he was!
naughtynati chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
I was glad to see you derived pleasure in writing this...cuz it was my absolute pleasure to read it ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/19/2014
It might have been a little fun to write but it was hella fun to read.
Jane chapter 1 . 6/27/2014
Those were the absolute WORST pick up lines I've ever heard! I can't believe Spock fell for them!
OnceUponAFedualFairyTale chapter 1 . 4/9/2014
So hilarious! Its my favorite.
Elaine du Lac chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
Yeah, fun. Lots of giggles and ear to ear grins while reading this one.
catbob1 chapter 1 . 3/25/2014
omg. Omg. OMG! Those pickup lines! OMG! Giggle! Snort! Gasp! Sorry. Trying to get up -heeheehee- from the floor where I fell -heehee, snort- from laughing so hard. This was -snort,gasp- perfect. Thank you.
reader chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
i'm going to have to test some of these lines out ;)
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