I love this story! I really truly do hope that you will continue with this story! I think the way that you made Sonic, (or should I say 'Lene) so flexible weigh the term ''boy'' and ''he'' is amazing! I also love how you have put the story together! If you ever update, I'll be watching! Thanks again for all the amazing stories! Have a wonderful day/night!

I'm going to die of old age! x.x it feels like 3 years have passed!

take ur time.

just don't forget this story.

I will pm u if i have to, because its a great story going on here.

I'm not joking. I will pm u if this don't update in another month.

hello bro my name is scourgehd and I know you don't know me...yet but I need you yes you to go to the great archer's page scroll down and it will tell you why im doing this p.s. can't wait for the next chapter love female sonic

psh, i babysitted for 4 days strait, i think this chapter is great though! i passed out before i could read it once i got back.*scratches back of head* that 11 yr old got nerv keeping me up almost 4 days and nights straight *sigh* about 24 hours of passed out sleep once i finally got home. glad i didnt mame anyone with my annoyedness.

Yay! My heart jumped when I checked my email and found this waiting for me! Anyway to the review!

Nice vocabulary, the way you describe stuff is very vivid and nice, also, great dialogue, It's almost like this is an actual TV shoe.

"He didn't know what he would do if Sonic ever changed."
I really like this line, it's got great foreshadowing, and it really shows how Tails feels. Great characterization, in one little sentance, that takes SKILL. Good job!

Great chapter overall, I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next one! Sonic and Shadow confrontation, now this HAS to be good!

This diservs more reviews, a great gend bend. i like this, i honestly do.
shadow should figure out sonics gender after fitting the peices into place.
1 sonic is actualy very frail compared to everyone else in the gang.
2 her hands arent as rough compared to any male what so ever
3 and she is mostly speed built, instead of hard muscles *like guys r suposed to have* she has soft muscles even if she is strong. *a comen fact, guys muscles r harder than girls even if they have the same muscle build -* i like the characters actions, there very well thought out :3 *and like themselves on sonic x* the way the story is put it took me a couple of minutes to realise this wasnt a new version of sonic x being humanised and more plot mixed in. then it was like a pillow shot to the head 'oh this is an awsome fanfic... not a new awsomer version shoot' *sonadow i aproov of* if this was a anime or manga, id be hooked on the series. the next update, i wonder if some other characters come in :D hopefully not chris... thatll ruin my hopes and dreams i dislike him with a passion. chris thorndyke i no like...

any way i hope the update goes well *no virises or pc crashes to worry about hopfully :3* yay sonadow, and yayz awsome fanfic.

this diservs more reviews that r better than mine XD.

You know, this place really needs a place to compile all reviews for a story, rather than just one chapter. But, let me start out with everything I've noticed from the beginning to the end.

The first thing I noticed was your characterization skills, let me tell you, that is DEFINATELY one of your strong points. The way you're able to paint the characters so vividly is wonderfuly, a great aspect.

Another thing I notced was that you have an incredible vocabulary, and know how to use it. You're descriptions are beautiful, and really help to "paint the picture" in my head. In fact, while reading this, I went to go fold the laundry, and when I came back ,the first thing that came to my head was, "I don't remember that episode in Sonic X!" it took me a good five minutes to realize I was reading a fanfiction.

Also, you're dialogue is extremely realistic, I really enjoyed that. I'm overjoyed that I found this story, and cannot wait for your next update!

I don't think you're rushing too much. There are a few things that bug me, though - why would Knuckles remember Shadow's name yet barely know Tails? It is an AU but it still seems odd. The Silver and Blaze suddenly appearing is kind of odd, too. Not in a bad way, just unexpected, I guess. Makes me wonder whether Amy plays a part in the story at all.

Overall, this is interesting. I'll keep reading. :)

... I think that describes Tails fairly well... He's very smart, but he's still a child...

Ooooh, now I admit THAT is a helluva nice twist. I love seeing someone take a usual story and twist it ina way I didnt' expect. Looking forward to the next chapters. Damn nice work.

Why are there so few reviews to this? ;.; It pains my heart because I really like this story... Honestly! I haven't read a Sonic fic in like forever but this rocks! Somehow him being a her really fits, y'know? xD Anyways, I hope this gets an update soon~ I really like it!

moreee! i love gender bending fic 3 quickly write more~ i want sonadow noww lol jk

Please continue! pretty please? :3 and a bit more longer chapters, if that's not too much to ask? I really enjoy reading this!

arghh too short ! but great job updating so fast i'm soo happy !

Yeaaahhhhhhhhhhhh! Now thats what I'm talkin about! *Dances* This story is already awesome~ but ... *kitty eyes* Continuz Plz? 3