Great arc! I can’t believe how many OCs you have but you manage to keep all the names straight. I love Mio and Madara’s relationship and can’t wait to see it develop more hehe

Not only are you a wonderful author but you are also a comedic genius! Izuma thinking “introverted” is a disease? I laughed out loud! I think these light hearted bits really cut through the angst of it all

Great first chapter! I love the flow of your writing and cannot wait to see how this story progresses!

I shouldn't be getting my hopes anymore these warring state era fanfics are always the same

So mio will controlled for 90% of the story? Seems like it apparently

this story is strange. I like the storyline somewhat. but I seriously don't understand your mc. is she strong or weak. you seem to bounce between the two two times a chapter at least. Is she a crybaby bitch or a headstrong person who doesn't take shit from anyone. At the beginning of this story you had her as a manipulator extrordinaire and now she's the punchline of every bad joke imaginable. If this character continues to be such a joke your gonna lose a lot of readers. you write that you put her through some harsh ass training that would get her some major powerboost (training with weights that are apparently really heavy for so long will do that) but then a few chapters later she seems just as weak as before. like I get that she might not be hashirama or Madara level of badass but you could at least make it seem like she's having SOME improvement instead of making her make mistakes that green genin make over and over. And if you use the excuse that it's her personality that holds her back or some shit. this character just became that much more of a joke. like she seems more like a civilian at most parts of the story. your putting her against some characters that when you look at all the stuff she's gone through you think "she's gonna fuck this guy up in two seconds flat" and then your stuck thinking "wtf is she even doing in this profession" like make up your mind is she strong or not

I like your fanfic so far. Sweaty hands XD

pio? lol

Okay, so I've been reading Redesign offline for a couple of months now and I am not ashamed to say that the emotional pain this fic has brought me has me frothing by the mouth. I am terrified to binge this because it brings complete agony to my soul. I have to take breaks when reading Redesign because the shit Mio goes through actually makes me want to die with her.

So good job at making your readers suffer. Because I sure as hell did.

SHIN

...nononononono

I am drowning in despair.

Ayuka makes me want to rip out my hair from frustration! I hate her so much, ugh.

How is Mio not insane yet? I'm so stressed out and these things aren't even happening to me!

Niiicccee, Izuna!