Sigue esto está genial

Still love this fic. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter

Your story is amazing. But I think I found a typo in the first line of the chapter.
It should be Naruto not Anko as the first word of the chapter. That's all.
Thank you for this amazing story.

haven't you heard of the word "not"?

for example: she had to admit she was a little impressed, there were many people that could take such a beating and stand back up.

I'm pretty sure that was supposed to be "weren't" instead of "were".

you could make a mistake in how you spell a word, you could even confuse a word that sounds the same as the one you're supposed to use.
but having multiple mistakes in the difference between "do" or "don't" means you don't know basic English or haven't bothered to prove read your chapter before uploading, as it is a pretty big mistake that would be obvious if you read it.

Sorry if I come over as a douche, but come on! One mistake you can overlook, but multiple of the same error?

Muy buena historia es una combinación explosiva la de naruto con anko, sólo espero si bien sasuke puede morí y eliges que viva deberías destrozar su sharingan, pero hay que estar atentos ya naruto no tiene ningún apego hacia el no tendrá ningún problema en eliminarlo, además con la operación tubo la ayuda danzo.

Ive read tie story before but couldn’t remember where i left of so im re-reading your story... quick and short chapters which works with story but Itv leaves the readers hungry for more... there are still some grammar mistakes but nothing to sneeze at.. interesting take

Nice chapter.

First thing I want to say is I'm sorry I didn't review this chapter sooner or the newest one you just posted not to long ago. Real life is a pain in the ass and I've been trying to get motivated once more to write something. Doesn't help with the COVID-19 shit going around. Anyway I decided to read this chapter again and it was awesome.

So Sasuke has been properly punished for his crimes but now the little bastard has escaped and is heading toward Orochimaru to gain power to do his so called revenge against his older brother. What a puts he is and it's no thanks to that prick Danzo that he was able to escape. I hope you kill that asshole soon in this story and it leaves me to wonder. Will Naruto and Shikamaru succed in capturing Sasuke and forcing him to return or will it end with Sasuke escaping? Honestly I hope Sasuke dies for being a traitor but it's your story so your call.

Another thing I enjoyed about this chapter is Kakashi apologizing to both Naruto and Sakura for being a bad sensei and I hope he's serious about wanting to make it up to them and isn't just spouting bullshit. Hopefully he actually trains them in the future.

This is getting good and I hope to see more soon.

Good Luck Dragon6.

Dude totally should blind Sasuke how fkin funny would it be if he slashes sasuke's eyes

Looking forward to more of your work. Though, I think your spellcheck is on the fritz, might want to proofread this again.

Oh god that was beautiful. "You were never held as a child, were you?"

I just hope that the fight between Naruto and Sasuke at the Final Valley end differently. I know that Sasuke still going to end up going to Orchimaru base on how this story been going. I hope the author doesn't do these to 2 things. First one Sasuke beat Naruto like in cannon. This doesn't work this time around. Naruto stronger then Sasuke. Also Naruto has no bond with Sasuke either so has no reason to hold back beside not killing him. So it will be stupid if the author make Sasuke win just because he need him to go with Orchimaru for Shippuden. The second one is Naruto beat Sasuke only for Kabuto or Orchimaru to stop Naruto from taking him back. That another stupid one and it's a excuse used when author got a strong Naruto who can beat a weak Sasuke but need Sasuke to go to Orchimaru for Shippuden. The only way around this is for Naruto beat Sasuke. Return him back to Leaf. Sasuke get punished by the hokage that the civilian council can't do crap. Only for Kabuto to sneak into leaf and break Sasuke out before Naruto leave for the training trip or during. Truthfully I want to see something different like Sasuke died or get his chakra sealed and is no longer a ninja but this story been following cannon with some different twist here and there. So I doubt it but been a great story far.

wow!, very good chapters! and a very good story!, good job!

Glad to see your back, and a good chapter. Looking forward to seeing how things go in the next one

Well, that was pretty cool glad there's an update