THE THREE STOOGES

I find it utterly hilarious that you designed a scorpion digimon named Goldmon back in 2012, when six years later Kamen Rider Build revealed the ScorpionGold Form.

You need to work on your punctuation really badly, and you also need to describe ALL of the Digimon in detail. Other then that, this is a decent story.

Mr. Redwallfan2000... I will say your story with this one... wasn't half bad... HOWEVER, it's a C at best. My concern with it is not your Original Character Takuma or his past or his OC Digimon (or the fact that there is already a Scorpionmon and you never cleared that up) but my concern is regarding this Sailor Sun... I don't like that concept. Your Digimoon Chronicles is bad... like bad. Why would the Digidestined lose and die by a surprised attack by the Dark Masters? No less the originals. It wouldn't be Piedmon's style to kill off the children without letting them "entertain" his strength. The others would sadly follow with the exception of Puppetmon. EASILY Omnimon and ImperialDramon would destroy the Dark Masters and that would be the end of it... but instead you killed them off, had her meet Marcus and the confusion explanation of DATA SQUAD and even put in Sailor Moon in all of this, this Sailor Sun stuff, and here we are. I want to say you have an active imagination... but you're retarded. It makes less sense than if I saw someone lick their own crap with their tongue. You basically made this story even more confusing... but I will leave this to be.

Also... "Hahaha". You're... you're a special person, Mr. Redwallfan2000. I mean it's impressive to get 300 reviews... but to put this up in Youtube? You really thing people would waste their time to read your video? How cute. It really is... but I doubt anyone will watch such utter nonsense. It's a good fanfic... but expect to be sued by Digimon, My Little Pony and even Final Fantasy to do a "reading" of a fanfic that Fanfiction is even allowing without law sues. Don't be retarded and give up such a ridicules dream. I suggest you take it, and take some medic pills too.

This was an excellent epilogue. Takuma certainly thought things through with gaining Commander Firebrand, Rainbow Dash and Rika as his sidekicks rather they should be partners. Firebrand teaches Takuma the ins and out of the job, Rainbow Dash teaches him how to fly and Rika along with Renamon are litterally his spies for him on Earth. I loved Rika being able to turn into an Earth Pony and I shutter to think what will happen to Takato when he angers her. This was a well written fanfic and I hope to see more of Takuma's adventures in the future!

This was an excellent fanfic you have made. The Epilogue was epic. Oh I can just imagine Takuma crashing into a tree and getting stuck in it. That part was funny! The Ceremony was well written as well and seeing Goldmon blind Silver-Quill was also great. Great story and it was a great Epilogue...Hope to see more of Takuma's adventures in the future.

Pfffft.

The epilogue... let's end this with a bang.

With the D-Reaper gone, Takuma must now prepared himself for the ceremony in becoming the Guardian of Equestria and like you told me and how I agree, Takuma would need... the term sidekicks doesn't sound right. Maybe partners or mentors... something like that.

And yes, Rika is one and I agree with their friendly connection and how they can get along when the task is on the hand. That and Takuma doesn't want to leave her alone, wanting to still be his friend. So it's a good idea that they'll be together on this when Takuma needs help. Plus she's now an Earth Pony so watch out Takato.

Of course Firebrand is another good choice to prepared Takuma for his duties as Guardian and help other ponies and maybe teaching him stuff about fighting. Rainbow Dash just the same for his flying... and the other stuff I won't mention.

The presentation of Takuma as Guardian was nice as was for Yamaki to see his son fully grown... for Twilight too.

BOO. Haha, best line from Silver-Quill. Also like the discussion between the princesses and Sailor Sun too.

HA! Acid on the eyes and Twilight snapping when he used her mane as a towel. Silver-Quill had it coming but he makes a point before he got spray that Takuma needs to remember to being himself.

I'm glad Trixie won't be sent to the Gate of Destiny... for her "GREAT AND ALL POWERFUL" return which will backfire... unless you'll have redeem herself in some way.

And the last part is Sailor Sun revealed... honestly Takato should be asking: HOW?! YOU'RE FROM AN ANIME?!

Good epilogue. It went well and ended well... but the story of Takuma Sparkle is far from over and we'll see him again soon... WAIT, two sequels?

Like I said earlier and before, I wish you luck on the video thing but if you can't... well you can't. Just saying. Wish you luck Redwall.

Excellent last battle sort of chapter. Loved how Takuma used his Magun for the first time. He surely acted like Kaze did bringing out the Magun and firing Atamos, but the differences between the two is exactly night and day. Takuma can only fire it ONCE, while Kaze was able to use it mulitple times so long as Ai and Yue were allowing him too. Another thing is their character, Kaze used it constantly and at times didn't care for others around him...He was still seen as a hero, but Takuma is an Equestrian whom doesn't like killing and will only use the Magun when he's absolutely sure he needs to...Like as it's his last and only option left. I did love the ending with him and Fluttershy hugging and being a couple. Good work and I hope the Epilogue draws a good conclusion.

This was a very great last chapter! Loved how Sailor Sun managed to turn Fluttershy back to normal and enjoyed her tackling Takuma gently of course and kissing him. Loved his wish as well.

I really really liked how the chapter went and I can't wait for the next chapter to be really.

It kinda feels weird how it was so easily defeated. It feels like it isn't really gone, also there's the fact of Jeri still.

The final chapter... here we go.

Even in a bad situation, this actually makes sense that there's this moment that the princesses ask Takuma to become the guardian. Of course Takuma isn't sure as others say he'll do it right and yes, he's the only one who has gone through the journey he had to be qualified of such a position. I also liked Silver-Quill's moments.

So here Takuma, your one-shot weapon as the symbol of his duty... and the badge too. WAIT. The wish now? That was... pretty fast. And yes, bullets of negative emotions purified by the goodness of Equestrian magic. Makes sense honestly.

Alright, after checking up on Earth, the final battle begins as even the Sun Goddess and the others in the Digital World arrived to help the Tamers. Oh good, Digi-Chrome Magun... I didn't thought about it like that.

The Acid Rocket Bombardment, that's what it should be called for how devastating that attack can be up-close. So even with everyone helping, it wasn't enough as the D-Reaper will regenerate over and over again. Just one solution and Takuma knew it had to be done; Magun time.

I told you it was worth it. Even if his acid as MetalScorpionmon could have done it, the D-Reaper will only continue to regrow over and over making it impossible to stop it. The Magun and Atamos did the job, sucking the vile thing and since it was connected to the other D-Reapers, all three cease to exist. It amazes me the acid didn't destroy half the town but the Summon did? Makes sense and ironic.

It's over, D-Reaper defeated and finally Fluttershy can now be a Pegasus Pony again. Great! A good ending to such an impossible foe.

I don't think people understand that the Magun in this case, as Redwall has learned many things won't be "I'M USING THIS EVERY TIME" type of solution. Takuma knows how dangerous the weapon is now so it's his last resort if all things failed.

Just one thing... couldn't Celestia or someone or pony be able to I don't know, change the Magun so it's not always attached on Takuma's arm? Just curious... because... when he and Fluttershy... do the thing... you know?

Epilogue... this has been a long time. Looking forward to that.

You never seem to disappoint me. This was an excellent Chapter. Well written especially Takuma acting like his mother Twilight. And to make things even better, next chapter we'll see the Magun from Final Fantasy Unlimited! Wonder what Summon could destroy the D-Reaper. We'll see what you have planned, keep up the good work!

What a great chapter this was! The Tamers were able to Biomerge outside the Digital World. I too loved the part when all of them seperated to confront the D-Reaper on four fronts! Good work!