I'm clad I read this

Awwwww! It's so cute! I love it!️!

DAAAAAAAAAW THE FLUFF, IMMA DIE! This was cute, im favoriting this!

cute :)

That was so cute! I loved it :) I always love reading from Waldy's POV. His thoughts about Finnie…So cute…

Aww this was adorable!
I love how you made Tino the one to go after Berwald in that last moment. It was a nice touch to the piece. :)
I have a question... Are Tino's eyes really violet? I always thought they were brown... ? I don't know. I may be wrong. I haven't seen the anime in a while. Wow. I need to. It's my favorite-besides Naruto. Yup, that's what I'm spending my night doing :) maybeee (kinda sleepy)
Anyways, great chapter. I couldn't find any errors whatsoever. It was great and for your first fanfiction on here. More should read your work :D
Onto your other stories...
*looks at clock*
oh
well I can continue this tomorrow... or later today? lol it's about 12:00 am and maybe that's why this isn't a remotely good review. When my head isn't filled with drowsiness I will review your other fantastic stories. :D
This I promise!
*smiles and waves*

thats rather cute...

AWWWW! This was adorable! I have just recently started reading this pairing and it's stories like this that remind me why i started!

This is so freaking adorable! I can't even handle it! *squee*

D'aaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwww~~~! That was soooooooooooooo cute! OMG! You had me at the part when Berwald was going to give Tino the locket! Kyaa~!

Too cute! I was going to write a story like this but I don't think mine could master up to this! Great job! C:

This was your first fanfic! Wonderful job! Truly! It was really great. Just ... please ... next time (and I hope there will be a next time) you write Berwald talking d'n't t'lk l'k' th's. He never spoke like that, in the English OR Japanese version. Just some letters (even some consonants!) were cut out. If it helps, try saying it out loud to yourself. Anyway, great job again.