Hmm. Was this always a Merle and OC FanFiction? Did this used to be an eventual Daryl FanFiction?

holy wow this is so good! so excited for your next update!

Really liking the story and looking forward to reading the next chapter. Keep up the great work and update again soon please. - V.V.

Put aside Merle's temper, he's a pretty decent guy.

Fantastic chapter

More plz

Fantastic chapter

You have done an amazing job with this! I'm very impressed with your sense of characterization and setting. I love the way you write dialogue, it's the way people actually speak in terms of the way the sentences are composed. I love when the dialogue is very on point this way because otherwise, it takes me out of the story. Well done!

I'd have to be in bad need for companionship to put up with Merle calling me a nigger.

:D

The switching between the diferent point of views is to jarring. One minute its rick then its merle then its eden.

Also this chapter just got to cute for me. It went crom being a semi serious story it seemed to a 12 year old girls dream.

I like this story and like how you are portraying Eden - she is a real person and not some super hero. Can't wait until she meets Daryl. I like your style of writing and can't wait for the next chapter.

I have really enjoyed this book so far! I hope that you plan to update soon:)

wow your story is amazing i hope the sequel will arrive soon! read more!

Great chapter :-D
I am looking forward to reading more ;-)